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And now knowing what Shampoo and Mousse have lost, I look forward to Jasper\'s death, preferrably *painfully*! And now the question is, in the months he\'s been declared legally dead, has Jasper decided to kill Akane after all? As for Mr. Kyle, if he has a brain cell operational in his head, he\'s grabbed his wife and kid, and hopped the first plane to Europe! Maybe Africa... And Ryouga, if he\'s smart, is half way to Argentina(random pick)! And of course there\'s the question of Ukyo, Kasumi, and Nabiki\'s well being, but I doubt they were bothered in the last two months. Well, continue soon, please! Let the vengeance continue... Laters!

:( Sweety,
Im sorry. I was only joking about sending someone after you. Surely they dont really mean to hurt you. They are just upset that you are hooking up Ranma with Sheela. Still, if they are serious, thats not nice of them. Its your story. If we enjoy it, great. If not, oh well. But hehe, Im sure we will enjoy future surprises you have in store for us.

I never said this is how it ends, a bunch of people just sort of assumed that this is how it ended. I\'ve actually had this planned the entire time. Just because someone gets shot doesn\'t mean they\'re going to die and I\'m proud to say that I pulled the wool over many people\'s eyes with this one, but I got a bit of angry mail from people too. I was shocked. Secondly I\'d like to ask you call off Mr. Bogart. I recieved an angry instant message from him and have been fearing for my life ever since. Knowing a man that stars in a series called Fatal Fury is coming after me and has the ability to lunge at me with fire engulfing his first, tends to shrink ones wang in fear. Thirdly, Jimmy the Ice Pick was not going to endager Mrs. Saotome at all, he was going there to make sure no one tried to come after her. Watch Dog work.

WHAT?! Okay...
First, Ranma proposes to Sheela.
Next, he loses in the last chappy?
Third, you say this is how it ends...then say it wont?
BAH!
Wolfgang Krauser,
Im so sending Terry Bogart after you, mwahahahaha.
Oh yeah, Jerry sends a pizza man/ice pick guy to endanger Mrs. Saotomoe?
Grrrrrr.

The middle?? Hoo boy....

You\'re very wrong if you think this is the end. You\'ve now entered the middle.

I was wondering when Ukyo was actually going to pop up in all this. Man, what a shitty ending. But this isn\'t the actual end of the whole story, is it? Cause that would *really* just suck all around. Hopefully looking for one more in the relatively near future! Laters!

So you didn\'t update because you were playing video games - hell, at least you\'re honest. Nice chapter, I really enjoyed Marci, she made me laugh. Can\'t say I\'ve ever played a video game in my life, but I\'ll understand if you\'re lured back to the... pope wrestling or whatever... have a nice weekend

To answer some questions: You guessed the cyber name right, but Krauser is actually my middle name as well. Fantasticly awsome isn\'t it? and now for the listing. 1) There were so scooping the area. They\'re part time excavators, crime doesn\'t pay for every thing you know? 2) Marci idolizes Ranma as well as the things he\'s said in the past. No one said Ranma was a good role model. 3) My strong point is my dialog, I think, and I get bored of writting five paragraphs of of descriptive imagery, so I make up for it with witty dialog. That\'s why I have the other fic, for the imagery. Now that I think about it, it\'s actually going to start getting descriptive soon, and a little more fucked up. 4) Akane\'s going to show up when ever she\'s going to show up. No sneek peeks around these parts pilgrim, you get to read to collect your bounty. (Besides, I know you guys love the anticipation.)

Your cyber name is...Wolfgang Krauser, as in the villain from Fatal Fury, right? Kewl. Your story is hilarious and entrancing. There are a few things I need to bring up. 1) They were scoping the area, not scooping it. 2) Why did that cute little darling, Marci, have to cuss? It was both adoreable and funny, and I know it happens cuz their parents cuss in front of them, but still. 3) There\'s too much dialogue. It seems like all they do is scream at each other more than do stuff less. 4) When is Akane gonna show up again?