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for Grand Theft Auto: Nerima

by Kyva

person Scorpinac
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Holy-Shit\" handles, huh? My family calls them \"Oh Jesus\" bars, but hey, same dif. Nice work, Ranma is definately out there, and Ryoga is clueless as ever. Can\'t even rob a Police Station properly. Oh, and I liked Marci, too, she was too cute! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, things are definitely getting more complicated. But here\'s looking forward to seeing Ranma rescue Akane safe and sound, hopefully in the next chapter or two, maybe three. Laters!
person Blackrosephantom
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I visited some friends whom love to play this game. I laughed when they found a two-headed dildo in the police showers! =LOL= What I liked best about this game was that you can swim in the ocean, under the piers. It\'s so pure, simple, and beautiful down there. Anyways, I LUV THIS TALE! Oh, please do continue.
person brp
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome
I liked the club scene, with the goth vamps.
keep it up
will ranma and akane meet again, kiss, then part soon?
also, when will this end?
person Kyva
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m finally ending the Shampoo complaints here and the Ukyo thing people keep e-mailing me about. There is a reason for every thing I\'m writting in this and a reason people are acting different. Just sit back, relax and you\'ll see it all unfold. Anyways, thank you for you\'re awsome reviews, they mean a hell of a lot to me, and I never saw Donnie Drako and Gary Jules emo-ed the hell out of the song. Have fun and party hard.
person Scorpinac
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So what exactly did Bugsy ask him to do? Next chapter, right? You cut your finger off, seriously? Ouch... Don\'t suppose they were able to sew it back on or something? Well, looking forward to the next chunk, am willing to wait as long as neccessary. Laters!
person Rio Grande
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I just love it. It\'s too awesome, and I\'m sorry I never reviewed before this because it\'s just so funny and well written and clever. I love how utterly out of character everyone is, and simultaneously how pitifully in character some people are in these ridiculously terrible situations. The dialogue is wonderful and makes me laugh out loud, and I have to admit I\'m just waiting for the chapter when Ranma and Akane finally talk. I guess it doesn\'t seem as though Akane has changed so much, at least not like Ranma has, but I was sort of hoping she\'d be as cracked out as he is just to even their relationship out. My only complaint is that Shampoo came off as a little too weak, I mean, she\'s supposed to be a match for Ranma, not an easy hit for some beefy guys outside a club. And Sheela can be a bit much, and Ukyo\'s a little MIA, but I don\'t know why I\'m bringing all of this up because this has really turned into one of my favorite Ranma fics of all time. And there are some really amazing Ranma fics out there. Actually, I\'d have to say that in the past couple years you\'re one of the only authors to develop a new, decent Ranma 1/2 fanfiction. It\'s like everyone else up and died! So, thanks for that, and I\'m really sorry to hear about your finger... that\'s really bad, and tragic sounding. But, if you could, keep writing, that would be great.
xoxo
Rio
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Having had run ins with power tool failure, I can sypmathize. BUT GOD DAM.


Anyway. OH YEAH!
person Rio Grande
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
p.s - Um, sorry, I love Tears for Fears as much as the next crazed fan, but that scene in Donnie Darko when they\'re just zooming in on everyone\'s faces and Gary Jules is playing in the back... come on. That\'s kick ass. That makes Gary Jules kick ass.
person Scorpinac
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens...and thickens....and thickens! What could this Busy really be up to, I wonder? And will their little mass-money making plan actually work? Can\'t wait for the next one! Laters!

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