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Hi again.
I still disapprove of Grand Theft Auto, as well as the negative actions of the characters here. But I\'m contect that Ranma is a hero like Punisher, and that he will clean up the town. Also, get his mom and ex-gf out. Please complete this story. I LUV IT.

Maybe you already know this or maybe someone else pointed it out before...but you should use \'definietly\' in place of \'defiantly.\' Unless of course that was your intent.
If so, you are such a creative rebel. :P
PS, Why did Shampoo cut her hair?! Noooooo!!!

Well, at least they\'re relatively all right. Nice to know, though it *is* kind of sad that Shampoo had to cut her hair ( :( )... Any chance of Ukyo popping in for a brief cameo? Ah, well, back to business. 100K, huh? This should be fun... Laters!

You done a good combine Ranma 1/2 and Grand Theft Auto. The Nermia gang didn\'t end up like the way you thought the would end up as. Like Nabiki being a stripper, Soun and Genma durken loots, or that Ryoga would of cheated on Akane after finally getting a chance to date her and stuff. I did think that Ranma and Ryoga tende to get a little bitchy at time especial at the strip bar about Ryoga watching Ranma-chan do her thing, considering she ask him to do those kind of thing to get in with the boss. But kind of cleared that up in chapter six with that there more like sibilings then anthing else, but it seeems Shelly has other ideas.

Anyway great fic and I can\'t wait for the next update.

Okay, not bad. And with Ranma\'s track record, this badass holding Akane could even be another Jusenkyo victim wanting to get a little payback for his new \"lifestyle\". Who knows...well, okay, you do, oh great and masterful author. I\'ll be waiting on chap. 7! Laters!

Weel, at least she was alive up unti now. Blackjack, huh? That\'s my personal debt maker of choice, too... Now the question becomes, can they rescue her before Jasper actually DOES decide to kill her? And we still haven\'t seen our favorite Chinese Amazons! I\'d really like to see how they\'re getting on, or...not... Whatever...

Chapter 5 was great. Looking for more as you write new chapters. :)

Huh, I didn\'t think they were away that long... Well, at least we have a lead, and thank you for explaining the absence of Tofu, much obliged. So what exactly are Nodoka and Kasumi doing for money at present? Working at a grocery store, perhaps? A restaurant? Well, get the next chapter out soon, cause I wanna know who all\'s waiting back at the dojo!

Oh, yeah, and nice handling of Genma, the jerk! Now, about them Amazons?

No. Words. Should. Have. Sent. A. Poet.