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Cool stuff. Nice and dark Nerima you\'ve got there. Nice to see things played to the hilt, and in-character to boot. :)

Ooh, Genma in troublllleee! I do hope Akane isn\'t really dead, that\'d just stink. And while I like that they\'re already planning on taking Ukyo out with them, why not the Amazons, or the Kunos? Surely none of *them* wnat to stay in all this! And I never thought I\'d hear myself say this, but I wouldn\'t wish this even on THEM! (Well, maybe Tetwaki...no, not even him. His father, Koucho, though, he you can leave. Nut doesn\'t even seem to be all that bothered, anyway...) Laters!

Have I reviewed? It\'s fucking awesome. Akane needs to not be dead, and Ranma needs to fucking blow the town up. that would show them.

But hey, dead or not, awesome story.

Great story, can\'t wait to read more. It\'s nice to see something out of the ordinary.

great story. although i heartily disaprove of the games, this story is off to a wonderful start. please finish.

Well, this is certainly a different twist. Keep up with decent spelling and grammar, and this fic should be a real winner. I\'ll keep an eye out for more chapters, that\'s for sure.

Ooh, Ranma all dark. Cooool... Though I\'m pretty sure Ryoga\'s hair already and always was black, but I\'ll let that one slip. But why did Principle Kuno quit his job at Furinkan? That is to say, I\'m not seeing how that was affected by everything else, per se. And now I think about it, what happened to Dr. Tofu? One would think he\'d marry Kasumi, since he already loved her, if nothing else; it might protect her, anyway. Well, looking forward to the next chap., and hopefully Kasumi and the Amazons haven\'t fallen too low in order to survive...

Hey, no problem, relatively simple mistake to make. Update soon, okay! I wanna see just how Nabiki\'s changed in the last two years. And will we get to see Ukyo, the Kunos, the Amazons, and the rest as well? Speaking of the Kunos, What about Principle Kuno? Or is he on the street too after the \"liquidation\" of the Kuno assets?

Very nicely written, has much potential. I look forward to the next chapter. But are you aware you consistently misspelled Nerima. As you see, you reversed the \"m\" and the \"r\" every time, even in the title. Just thought I\'d point that out, in case you hadn\'t realized it.

Thanks for pointing that out for me. I knew I felt stupid for something.