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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally love the story idea and what you\'ve written! It\'s so cute having Mu and Shaka crushin\' on each other. They are a super adorable couple! =) I can\'t wait to read more!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You´re great!!!!!!!! this story it´s really adictive, Ilove SHUN/HYOGA pairings, but im telling you, I loved that Mu and Shaka thing.... its incredible=)
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh, fun. You\'ve got some interesting pairings lined up, that\'s for sure, and some nice phrasings.
(And isn\'t Shaka a *bitch* to write? ... (grin) ...
You did a nice job with the journal entries. You veered into a tendency to write them a little bit too girly and fluttery during the hot cocoa scene, but if you can keep a handle on that this will turn out to be a very entertaining fic.
(And isn\'t Shaka a *bitch* to write? ... (grin) ...
You did a nice job with the journal entries. You veered into a tendency to write them a little bit too girly and fluttery during the hot cocoa scene, but if you can keep a handle on that this will turn out to be a very entertaining fic.