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look my last review was too rude i will admit that and im sorry but the part in the review where i said (make ranma run away from home ryoga following him and make the next chapter them getting lost from ryogas cursed direction problem thus they would need to learn more about what causes it and maybe some more development for nodoka cause she realizes she just lost her child due to her own stupidity.) you should really think about this here cause if you watch the anime or read the manga you would know ranma doesnt take shit from anyone and in this you are making him to be a coward also rei being a real girl makes it impossable for her to be the heir ranma is the only heir. sigh at least this story is not as bad as moxibustion revenge like hell anything in that story would ever happen

you know a story is bad when you want nothing more than for the main character ranma to kill his own mother and fake sibling i say fake because this rei person is clearly fake i mean he just happens to be better than his brother and better looking i call bullshit on that plus the fact that ranma ryoga akane and the others are just obediently listening to them makes it worst if you want to improve this train wreck make ranma run away from home ryoga following him and make the next chapter them getting lost from ryogas cursed direction problem thus they would need to learn more about what causes it and mabye some more development for nodoka cause she realizes she just lost her child due to her own stupidity.

I was ready to dismiss this because its basic premise is so absurd even by Ranma standards. But it actually managed to be good anyway. I really wish there were more of this to see how it developed...since I assume it was intended to have a happy ending for RanmaxRyouga and AkanexRei. Oh well.

hello i really like the beginning of your fanfiction do you write the next chapter? sorry if my english is not really good because I'm a french and the english is not my mothertough if you want to speak with me will be pleased

I really love the fact that Ranma and Ryoga are going to have to get married. I hope you update soon.

I'm enjoying reading this story. The world needs more Ryouga/Ranma!

You should continue this - I got a kick out of it, and would like you to begin putting the relationships together - maybe Ryouga gets a glimpse of Ranma dn likes it - we already know Akane likes Rei.

Update this - its cute and has possibilities. How will Ranma and Ryouga come to terms?? I really want you to write that chapter!

Hey there! Hope that you continue this fic - its weird and wonderful taking Nodoka's bizarre point of view regarding grandchildren to the insane logical conclusion. Looking forward to both chapters in which Akane likes Rei, and Ranma gets with RYoga.

This is just horrifying. I can only hope that this Ranma kills this Nodoka-shaped thing that is insisting on his slavery and rape.