rate_review Reviews

I know the fear that pre-empts one's first lemon post! I think you did a wonderful job and I enjoyed your flowing use of adjectives and similes! "Crashing back against hers like a tidal wave," how brilliantly spoken. Keep up the great work. I'll be taking a look at your other works!

That was really incredible! I can't believe that was your first attempt! I really enjoyed Chrno Crusade when I watched it this spring and your story really sparked my interest. I don't really think they are out of character.. I mean I could see Chrno acting that way when he goes into his full demon form so I don't think it is unreasonable to think he could be that way given the situation they were in.

I could see her becoming submissive to him like that, in a sexual situation. I could really see that.

So bravo on this story. I really enjoyed it and I hope you will write more stories in the future. The two I have read here are some of the best AFFN have to offer.

I was great. It was a little OOc. but it was good. and do not be sorry about what you write. You should never feel bad about how you feel about things.

I'm too lazy t'sign-in.
But I liked it.
So far this is my first time reading A CC fan fic.
It was rather stimulating if I do say so myself.

I love it! Please update soon.

Oh,my god.That was so enticing.It wasn't dark in those kind of feared,twisted ways.I really liked it...it has more of an alluring tone...like drawing someone in...wow...I totally idolize you as of today.Even if it WAS just ONE story..but,hey.That was extremely fantastic.

This was SOOOOOO good!The best lemon in who knows when!

This story was great. I really think that you did a good job, what with this being your first adult fanfic, and I didn't have any problems at all with writing. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.

Wow....I mean...HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HOOOOOOT!!!!!
O.O...Phew,I`m all flushed!^^;;No,really,this is your forsat lemon???????Holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!I sqwear,this is teh best lemon I`ve raed in the mean tiem!Wow...You`re amazing!Please ,write more!You`re really good!This was amazing and I hope to see more of your works!The darkness was a great touch!I loved this story! *evil grin*I`ll wait for more!

Awww, I was gonna jus leave, but then you went and said please review. ^ ^ It was a nice story, and surprisingly as religious as I am sometimes, I wasn't offended at all. Poor Chrno, wanting that feisty nun, but only getting to 'taste' of her once. Maaaan, I wish something like this would actually happen on the series.

On to a serious note, they did seem a bit OOC, but people usually don't act just the same during sex. It's a carnal feelings after all, so I wouldn't worry about it. I really liked it, and considering I've been hunting a good ChrnoRossette all day, I'm quite happy now (haha, and I've only watched episode 1 and part of 2...it's an addictive series, ne?)