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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Amazing. Simply amazing. *shivers at the thought of a nude Chrno* Mmmm...nummy...XD You\'re writing style is fabulous. It was very fluid, and it made the story all the better to read. Great work!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. As you said, a bit OOC, but I like the darker side of Chrno, and it\'s written very well. Thanks for sharing :)
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was done just right. Passionate with those delicious hints of darkness lurking beneath the surface. Well written and you have a wonderful way with words. I\'d say you have a talent for erotic writing if this is only your first attempt.
Amy
Amy
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. I love C/R and this was a little dark but not that dark. It was a bit short but I really loved it. Please continue writing.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
E...........O.O................3
I liked it this much!
what a way to break my chrno Crusade fanfic cherry. Beautiful. stunning. I love it. I am almost afraid to read anything else. However, I will read the one you suggested. I liked Chrno in this, dark is good.......very good
Much Love
Eddie
I liked it this much!
what a way to break my chrno Crusade fanfic cherry. Beautiful. stunning. I love it. I am almost afraid to read anything else. However, I will read the one you suggested. I liked Chrno in this, dark is good.......very good
Much Love
Eddie
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!! This was just my type of story. I really liked it. I do hope you try to write another one! It was truely incredible! I loved how at the end, you said, \'And no one but them would ever know.\' And how the darkness was mentioned throughout the whole story. I really loved this story. I do hope you do another one. Ja! ^-^
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm... pretty good ^-^ I liked it... and the manga does hint at chrno\'s darkness more... though I would really call this a \'dark fic\' no offense of course, if that is what you were going for... I like dark fics so I\'ve read a lot of them so I guess I\"m a bit \'desensitized\' if you get my drift! lol! nice work!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Lemon!! I love the darkness you showed so well in Chrono ~ you let it peak out, just how it would really happen in real life, in the height of passion. The blunt statements that Chrono makes: \"My darkness wants you\" and \"Let me have you\" ~ it just made my body thrum! And it was so perfect having Chrono mark Rosette\'s physical body as his possession the same way that the watch marks her soul as his.
Would very much like to see more ~ either additional PWPs added to this fic or more one shots of Chrono and Rosette.
Would very much like to see more ~ either additional PWPs added to this fic or more one shots of Chrono and Rosette.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your first lemon? I have absolutely no complaints! In fact, thank you! Seriously, any Chrno fic added to this section that isn\'t yaoi is greatly appreciated! Finally, Chrno Crusade is getting the popularity it deserves. Little by little. ^__^; Anyhow, I really enjoyed your one-shot, and I seriously hope you think about writing s\'more.
Again, thanks and good luck!
Again, thanks and good luck!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad I liked it you should make another chapter to it though