rate_review Reviews

I like. I liked the way you brought out that inner darkness in Chrno. ^___^ Kick ass!

I thought it was really good for a first time lemon author. I\'ve read crap, and this is definitly NOT crap. Hurray, you\'ve made it into my non-existant most loved stories list! (I should get around to writing that here soon....^^;) This is an awesome Chrno Crusade fic, not some yaoi between two characters. I will honestly say that this is in the top five of the most well-written lemons I\'ve ever read. I\'m also being very serious, and I\'ve read a lot of lemons (tee-hee!). Are you planning on writing more Chrno Crusade fics anytime soon? I must keep a lookout for them!
Please write more Chrno Crusade fics!!! Please!!

Good work! I really enjoyed it, hehehe ;-)

Aw, that\'s so cute.... and no, the thought of Chrno being that dark isn\'t odd at all - in fact, it was in character for the most part. He\'s got a long past, and well, he IS a demon. The only thing I could think of was that Rosette probably wouldn\'t have been that willing to let him kiss her, etc (You know, she\'s smack him a couple times or something), and Chrno probably would have enough sense not to ... er, \'take\' her while she was so young. He may be a demon, but he loves her so much, I personally think he wouldn\'t take that risk so easily - It kind of seemed like a spur of the moment kind of thing, and Chrno\'s the type to REALLY think before he acts. But otherwise, adorable \'fic. ^_^ Like I said, Chrno wasn\'t totally out of character. (My critiques were meant very lightly - don\'t take them to the extreme. You did wonderful!)

I hope to see more from you soon! :3 Excellent job, and straight A\'s for you for being your first lemon. o.o Dag yo. *Hugs*

Hot, strangely romantic and highly erotic as well. I love the manga and the anime and found this wasn\'t what you\'d call too OOC at all. Nicely done.

Hey that was really great and interesting ^_^. I like it when people make Chrno\'s character seem darker, it seems really interesting to me. Great job once again and yeah, they were out of character but i still like it. Keep up the great job and hope to see more of your works soon ^_^.