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for Phoenix Fire

by evilfairy

person omotou-chan/muse
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im awke!!! *nods sleeily*...*blinks* yaaaaaaaaaay i wsa written into the story!! yaaaaaaaay yaaaaayy
*jums with glee*
person Hellion
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the worst story I\'ve ever read. Horrible plot and stupid attemps at humor................


Just kidding! I love it. Great plot, it makes me want you to write faster. I love your humor, girl. You are a great writer! Keep writting and reading them to me. Love you!

Jay
Spank Your Inner Moppet!
person maile-ness
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, the transtion from conversation to monster could have been a bit more...\'oomphed\' up im also thinking, the more i read the story, you use ,odern language a lot, and i dont remeber....in the anime are they really this \'slang\' savy?
person imoutou
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mkies, more comments! 1) demons! inuyasha sounding, just realzigning...but yes, same as preious comment, the writing is good, just those two bits...
2)im at home, mum hasnt said a word to me....nor have i hr...
3)i read and reveiwed, can i have hot wild sex with chi now? :D
person fushigiyugifan
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi great chapter. i liked it. update soon k. byes
person imotou-chan
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok ok, i know i said i wasnt a tauski fan....but....NOW I KNOW A SECRET AND I HAVE TO FID OUT WHAT HAPENS!!!...\"please contiue\"... i know where you live nee-chan...and if i must...i will come....and i will steal all your inu yasha!! (not that i like it...honestly, i think it sucks...yeah yeah...thats it, it sucks...) and....i\'ll buy crossaints and eat them all!!! mwah hahahaa!!...sleping now ni ni ^^
person me
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
verry iteresting i cant wait to see were this goes please updatte
person fushigiyugifan
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay u updated very good, there were a few misspelled words, but it was a great chapter please update soon. byes.
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ITS GOOD i liked it . please update soon. besides i wanna know what happens next. byes
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HMMM... VERY INTERESTING, PLZ CONTINUE

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