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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed. I cried. I was fanatic as hell! This is an awsome fic, i just loved how you wrote Hakkai and his feelings. They really tugged at my heart <3
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brava!
The story kept me till the end and left me screaming for more.
~Loki
The story kept me till the end and left me screaming for more.
~Loki
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm really impressed. It was funny AND hot, and adorably romantic. Nice job.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to say I liked this. Very nice indeed! Hakkai must overcome his own repression (something I think we can all appreciate in our sadistic culture of denial.) Brings up how Hakkai\'s christian roots always seem to conflict with the reality of his life. Cool!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to read and review this. I’m so far behind. Stupid, huge, useless paperweight on my desk.
Whew.
Several people contacted me and told me about this after you posted it. They told me I had to read it. I’ve finally been able to shove everything to the side and get some reading done.
I am writing this review on very little sleep. I hope it is coherent.
I really enjoyed this. You presented a side of Hakkai’s sexuality that I don’t agree with, but you supported your take on it in very subtle ways and I think it worked very well. (I personally see him a closet freak – he slept with his sister that is not the making of a prude. LOL!) What you presented keeps very closely with how his character is presented and I think you did a great job, my freakish fantasies aside. Snicker.
Keeping with your presentation of Hakkai’s sexual inclinations, you did a marvelous job with verbiage. The clinical in Hakkai perspective and dialog versus the vernacular in Gojyo’s dialog was wonderful. Great contrast.
Using Hakkai’s fastidious nature when it comes to cleanliness was an excellent tool for eliminating the “squick” factor and keeping the action going. Great job.
The self-reprobating thoughts were powerful. I really enjoyed how you showed his conflict and worked him through it. Great job.
The last line is a ringer. It shows that he knows he’s been holding her spirit back – something I have long wondered about.
Good stuff!
Thank you for sharing.
Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
Whew.
Several people contacted me and told me about this after you posted it. They told me I had to read it. I’ve finally been able to shove everything to the side and get some reading done.
I am writing this review on very little sleep. I hope it is coherent.
I really enjoyed this. You presented a side of Hakkai’s sexuality that I don’t agree with, but you supported your take on it in very subtle ways and I think it worked very well. (I personally see him a closet freak – he slept with his sister that is not the making of a prude. LOL!) What you presented keeps very closely with how his character is presented and I think you did a great job, my freakish fantasies aside. Snicker.
Keeping with your presentation of Hakkai’s sexual inclinations, you did a marvelous job with verbiage. The clinical in Hakkai perspective and dialog versus the vernacular in Gojyo’s dialog was wonderful. Great contrast.
Using Hakkai’s fastidious nature when it comes to cleanliness was an excellent tool for eliminating the “squick” factor and keeping the action going. Great job.
The self-reprobating thoughts were powerful. I really enjoyed how you showed his conflict and worked him through it. Great job.
The last line is a ringer. It shows that he knows he’s been holding her spirit back – something I have long wondered about.
Good stuff!
Thank you for sharing.
Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a amazing story. I love it. It\'s not over romantic, nor is it heartless. Keep up the great work :)
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. ^_^
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa... one of the best i\'ve read so far.. I\'ll be looking out for your name! THat I seldom do for ANY fic writer! n____n
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I will say this is one great fic. Great mood, very wonderful vivid descriptions. I loved the emotional interaction between Hakkai & Gojyo. Plus the sex was sizzling!!! I need a smoke hehhe, just kid. Please continue with some more Saiyuki fics. Great Work!!