rate_review Reviews

A LITTLE MORE LEONxD ACTION WOULD BE REALLY NICE!

Ahhhh!!! How can it end there?!?!?! AHHHHHHH!!!!!! Okay, breathe.... Good description! Your alley smells really nasty. ;b

Man! As I was reading chapte rfive, I was thiking \"Get to the inevitable smut!\" And, then, of course, there was chapter six. Your plot has its greasy little claws in me, and *sniff* I want more... *squuuuueee* I love your D... XD

you know, there\'s only one word that sums up my reaction to this story.
Wow
pretty lame reaction but hey, can\'t be helped
this is one of the best PSOH fanfiction I\'ve read
please update soon!
SassandraS

Woot! That was great, very nice chapter... Mmm, I\'m very tired, but I just wanted to tell you that. What\'s up with the slackers in this fandom and the not reviewing?! You wankers... Anyway, loving the story- particularly the plot element, which is something a lot of stories lack (like mine... [hits self in head])- and I really like the way you write the characters, particularly D. I\'ll be back for more. =]

Nice. I like your characterization of Jill and how you fleshed her character out. But I\'d be remiss if I didn\'t say I reaaaallllllyyyy wanted to see more action in this chapter, or soon at any rate. I\'m just dying to know what\'s going on... But I suppose I have learned a *little* patience. ;b Keep up the good work. =]

[shakes head] It\'s supposed to start with a D... ;b But very interesting... I can\'t wait to see where this goes. =]