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.. it was awesome!

i love everything about this fic! i think you tie the lemons in whith the plot nicely!

I\'m glad you updated. I really like this story and can\'t wait to see what you do next. Keep it up and update when you have time.

Hey! That\'s really nice of you to take my comments into consideration. I must say that though the other Furuba characters may have cutsie names for each other, Kyou doesn\'t. The only nickname he uses, besides Kusou-nezume is Shishou, which is a title of honor. That\'s why it seems so out of character to me. However, I still love your story, and I don\'t want you to change it just because I feel differently than you do. I think this story is developing quite nicely, and... well any Yuki/Kyou makes me happy. I liked the first real lemon. I like how you\'re keeping it slow and not rushing them into anal sex, just to do it. Also, though I am at odds with some of the characterization you use for Kyou, I think everyone else is pretty much right on. Your Shigure is especially good.

Keep writing. Write what you like. I\'ll still read, even if I do have to endure \"Yun-yun\" ^__~

I don\'t remember if I told you this before, but I absolutly love your idea for this story. It\'s so sweet. I can\'t wait till you finish. Oh and I liked the nicknames I thought they where cute.

I\'m so happy you update. I like how this story is going and I\'m still sticking with what I 1st throught. Keep it up and when you have the time please update.

Okay........I just love your story!!! Its awsome so far!!! You just have to update soon I can\'t wait to find out how it all turns out!

I\'m so loving this story. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please update soon and keep up the great job.

Okay, I just have to say the whole \"Yun yun\" thing is stupid in my opinion. I can not in any way shape or form see Kyou ever saying that. That said, I still like the rest of the story. It\'s kind of plodding along right now. I guess at this point I\'m not sure what the point, drive or goal of the fic is. It\'s nice and stuff, but I hope you have some ultimate goal in mind for the story. It started out being about Kyou\'s suppressed emotions. Is it still about that? Is it about Yuki\'s punishment? Just wondering if you have a real direction or if you\'re writing based on what people tell you in reviews. So far I really like this story, but if it starts to meander, I tend to lose interest. That\'s just me though. I like a tight story and I don\'t like any excess fat or lack of direction. You\'re a good writer. I\'ll trust in your abilities.

OK, I appreciate your criticism! it definately does have a direction, but maybe I\'m not getting to it fast enough. I have no problem speeding the plot along, but there will be little blurbs of lemony smut stuck in here and there if you want to skip through it for the plot.
You don\'t like the Yun Yun thing... hmm... Is this the general consensus? If so I can take it out. It is just in my expirience, everyone around me comes up with pet names for everyone else. (I have no idea where some of them come from, I mean my mom calls me Popo...) I don\'t even have a \'P\' in my name... regardless, this is especially true for my partners, so I thought nicknames felt natural. (The fruits basket characters have a lot of nicknames for each other anyway) Thanks for reviewing. Criticism is always welcome!!!

-Suki