rate_review Reviews

So should I make the chapters longer? I can do that if you\'d like, however, I woulnd\'t update as often. (I also tend to like longer chapters) what is the general consensus?

That was a pretty hard chapter. Poor Kyou can\'t talk to his own father. I like your writing style, and though I like longer chapters, I\'m satisfied that you update regularly and still keep the quality. Can\'t wait to see how you resolve this.

Wow, figured it out already, huh? Nice job. Is it a little too obvious? Maybe I should mix it up a bit... who knows. Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it. As always, constructive critism is welcome!!! (I wonder if everyone gets it, but it\'d be a shame if some people were guessing right and ruining it for everyone else (or me, I\'d be SOO sad if it was too obvious) ) I\'m rambling. Hmm, you could email me if you think you\'ve got it (I won\'t tell you if you\'re right though) or not... I\'m still rambling. Anyway, I totally appreciate your reviews, hopefully I\'ll finish this story before I get too distracted. Thanks again.

yuki and kyo?? it seems sad... :(

Hmmmm. I have a sneaking suspicion I know what\'s going on. If it\'s what I think it is, then I\'m going to give you credit for a great idea. I really like this story. It\'s going to be very interesting how you reveal all the secrets. Keep going. You\'re doing a fantastic job.

*plays dramatic music* And so the plot twists! Nice work. Loved it. ^_^

update soon

Well that was an interesting start. I\'m not sure what you have planned for these two, but I really like it so far. I like your writing style. You don\'t over-angst, but you keep that painful tinge to it. I can\'t wait to see the next chapter!