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for Bionic

by FantismalSpider

person Anon
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, I know that this hasn't been updated in years but this is an amazing story and I would love it if you would continue!
person RowanTree
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm glad I decided to give this story a try - I usually avoid AU stories.

This is really good, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

RowanTree
person lijana
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am fascinated by this story!

I like the characters and I guess though I find the angst is a bit much it is still interested.

I am happy that Waya has been rescued and I hope that this marks the turning point in the fortunes of the kids in this story.

I await the rest!
person Kat
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn you for getting my hopes up. T_T Mit-chan! However I am looking forward to more of this! ^_^ Go Waya!!!! And Itsumi!!!!!
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow dude.. i have to say, i've seen your story on here for awhile and never read it cuz i thought "how the hell do you put the hng chars into that kinda of environment and story and have it make sense for their characters?? i mean that would have nothing to do with go and go is their life!" (yeah, bad narrowminded thinking on my part there i guess.. sorry!) but today on a whim i decided to read your reviews and they all seemed glowing and what little information about the fic there was in the reviews made me even more curious lol.. and now that i've read the whole thing so far i'm like "damn! it's really good!!" it's definitely a change of pace from the usual hikago fics, but you actually make it work!!

i really like the world you've put together, it's intricate and interesting... and i'm so happy sai's in it!! it's so sad in canon fics, no matter if the rest of the fic is happy, cuz sai isn't with hikaru anymore... and all the bionic powers for everyone is really cool...

now that mitani saw the others and they were sooo close by, will they meet again soon and be able to work together to get kaga?? will mitani be able to leave zama soon??

oh yeah, and as for waya's m-preg.. i usually don't like m-pregs, mostly just because it's SOOO unbelievable even for fiction, but with this future environment and the mutations that can be caused from this type of tampering/manipulating with human/bionic life it actually IS believable.. but now i wonder, now that waya's out, is he gonna keep the baby? does he even want it? has a maternal/paternal bond formed or will he be revolted at the idea of the child of his rapist growing inside him? and if he doesn't want it, how will they abort it? can they even? how far along is he now i wonder? and if he keeps it, what will happen once it's time to deliver? will you include a mutation of his anatomy to make it able to be born naturally? or will he need a c-section? and if so, who will do it?

also, despite the fact that i love the story mostly revolving around what all the boys are going through, i also can't help but think and wonder what's going on with the headmaster and cop from the first chapter.. are they still looking for them? did THEY know they're bionics? or do they now?

lol, sorry, i guess i have too many questions heehee.. but i REALLY like this story and i'm just so interested in what will happen next!! i can't wait til you have more!!

~ LG
person Kat
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yatta! You gave Mitani a job! XD And as a trapeze artist! I am *insanely* happy he's not whoring any more. ^_^ And I still love your Tsutsui from the bottom of my heart
person Horizont
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Putting your well being first, that\'s very responsible and shows that you are not an anime character. *lol*
Well I hope you get better soon! Happy recovering! ^_^x

~Horizont
person Stranj100
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you heal quickly, I\'ll try and wait paitently for the next installment.
person Kyo-nezumi
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this it\'s one of the best au HnG story I ever read write more soon even though you are writing this for your own pleasure.
It really interesting a little confusing with all the MH?? things but I got it some what keep up the good work.

update soon!
person Horizont
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoooo, yet another chapter! ^_^x Took me a while to review... I went to Paris (which meant no internet) and had a lot to do recently...
...anyway! Akira\'s ability is really amazing and most of all useful. Not that talking to ghosts isn\'t...

Right, Dorothy is such a bad influence for dear little Ogata. *hugs him* He\'s such a good guy, just a bit... not so good, I guess. ^^x
Um, I must say I\'m not much into m-üreg, but I can live with it if the story is good, do it\'s alright. ^^x

I\'m looking forward to the next part... I\'ll have more time to read now. XD
~Horizont

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