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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story but you need to finish it. too many questions need answering. do they nab the rapist? does dee finally open up to ryo? do they make up?
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story even if it is a little sad. i have questions do they finally catch the guy? does dee finally open up 2 ryo?
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this through for the first time... it was really great! I know you haven\'t updated in a while, but I\'d love to see more.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aargh! Why aren\'t you updating anymore? I\'ve been waiting forever, and you haven\'t added to it!
Sorry, that sounded a bit horrible. What I mean is, I\'m hooked on this story, and I\'d love to see more chapters!
Pretty please?
Sorry, that sounded a bit horrible. What I mean is, I\'m hooked on this story, and I\'d love to see more chapters!
Pretty please?
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD COME ON WRITE MORE YOU HAVE ME ON THE EGDE OF ME CHAIR I EVEN FELL OFF ONCE OR TWICE BUT MY EYES NEVER LEFT THE SCREEN EVEN ON IMPACT PLEASE PLEASEPLEAS WRIT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Dee
~Dee
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has become a very absorbing story and I can\'t wait to see what\'s coming up next. Good job with the priest - many of us Catholics are caught between our own convictions and a church which bases its views on centuries of fossilized attitudes.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! No! Mother Lane! I just adore her in the manga series, no! Poor Dee and Ryo, make Ryo help his love get over the crisis! I beg of you! I love the way the story is progressing, I wish immense luck on finishing it and I\'ll be coming back to check for updates.
signed by the vulpixfairy
signed by the vulpixfairy
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry for not reviewing for a while. I really like where you are going with this. This killer has some serious issues, it sounds like he was molested by a priest when he was little. I hope Dee doesn\'t find out that his mother was raped, I don\'t think he\'d be able to handle it. I thought it was a nice touch to say Ryo\'s father was catholic and give Ryo that understanding of Dee\'s faith. You are doing a wonderful job with this and I\'m sorry that not many others are reviewing.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a sad and emotionally moving story. Great job with writing. I hope that Dee and Ryo will be able to get through this. *hugs Dee*. Can\'t wait for another update. :)
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, wonderful. I love the flow of your dialogue, especially the witty banter between Dee and Ryo. You\'re doing a good job with this. I look forward to reading the next chapter.