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Oy, the king is dead/dying? Oh gosh I do hope that he's not too injured... and I hope too see more of Kaiba. *grins*

yeah! that was so sexy and medival!!

...thank you; I was hoping my ending scene would turn out well.

As for Sensui, at least he got to fight Younger Toguro. :)

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Some of those thanks should go to Chaotic Mayhem; she helped me tighten up any grammar errors I might have missed. I probably won\'t need any more betas for this story, but I\'ll definitely use betas again. (even though one story I\'ve completed now keeps making my betas vanish...but I digress.

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Did anyone catch the Zatch Bell(Gash Bell) reference?

Alas Anubis-sama, I have no criticism! Your story muted my tongue to con-crit! That was incredibly sexy and I totally dig the plot! Though I got sad at the parts with Sensui. *sniffs*

This is really bizarre. I \'m not at all familiar with YuGiOh so that part is kind of going over my head. I really like, however, how Kuwabara is the somewhat homely but well loved prince. The Jagan appraising his heart was a nice touch.

I couldn\'t believe it when I read that Luffy, I assume it was Luffy, was dead. Did any of the prisoners besides Roger survive?

Ahh I got to thank Alter for telling me about this newest chapter.
I\'m not too familiar with Yu-Gi-Oh so teh others I\'m not to clear on who\'s who but since this is an alernitive story with the characters having different pesonalities fitting for their part, I can still follow your story-telling.

I do love this.

That old saying: \"A man(woman) is his own worst critic....\" Plus, my RL experiences with this are limited. I do know there was very little in the way of conversations once it got to a certain point.

As for Seto hunting the dragons: In the first ep of YGO: DM, silly Seto (:D) rips a *certain* beloved card in half belonging to MUTOU *Sugoroku*. The dead dragon Sugo is a ref. to that. Mokuba, OTOH, is just curious about the dragons.

I do thank you for your continued support of this piece. Other than a spot during Rapunzel/Yukina\'s makeout session with Kuwabara(Kazuma) [cloth-covered mass...her sex!? no...! I think I ran out of better words.], I think I may be improving.

Hopefully as I continue on this(and a new plot bunny I\'m working on), my lemon skills will improve. :)

Please continue to read & review--keep \'em coming. :D

ACSound

Hehehe... why do people always state that they are bad with certain things? The lemon was neither dirty nor displeasing. In fact, it was what a romantic lemon should be. Hmm, and that bit of Seto and Mokuba going after a dragon... that\'s just insane.

That was completely interesting. I like how you wove this story together.