rate_review Reviews

To Cate: Thanks for your review. I\'m not sure what word choice you are referring to and wish you would have left more details. I usually don\'t use a beta reader on any of my fics (and usually get good reviews) but post my fics on my LiveJournal and read comments of people on my Friend\'s List. I did correct the spelling error (can\'t believe I missed that). I changed some of the wording to improve the flow but didnt\' see any other grammar mistakes besides the spelling. If you could offer more details about what words were \"jarring\" I would appreciate it. I am always trying to improve my writing. This story seemed harder to write then most.

I enjoyed the story, but was distracted by the short sentences and grammar mistakes. Priests and nuns make vows, not vowels. Some of your word-choice was rather jarring, as well. A beta reader would help your story immensely.