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oh i am in lemon heaven.He is so cute even thou they kinda portry him in love woth Yuki.He has such the bad boy look. Great story!

You are a good writer and I hope you continue to write. Please tell me if you write anymore stories! tnx.

you should probably reread your story. I was going to put the spelling/ grammer problems in the review but there are a lot. But your story is good and with correcting, it could be great. please email me if you have any questions.

Oh man dis be great here right hturr man hey wow im ur first SHIBBY!!!! rock on i lik ur writn dude or dudet got me rlly goin der man phew i thnk ima need a smoke listn to my commi (communist) an hippy side
Hippy-Dude u set the groove man its lik a good jive but still prrty low jus try n raise it a bit mkay btw add a bunch of BJs in ur next story peace yo Commi-Oi de bloody story be good i likd it but u can do more try an put some rough action into it more lik maybe anal ehehehhe well cheerio thn. Btw thnks for reviewn my frens fic btw dude she be named dark avenger jus helpn another dude out.

that was completely awsome no critacisom from me i give it to tumbs up