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I love this story!!! please update soon!!!
As for how Robin came back to life I would like to think it was Amon who brought her back. They seem to have such a conection and I\'m such a romantice that i believe love can do anything. I know stupid huh.
anyway keep up the good work.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Hi. I like how the story looks so far...maybe Nagira left the letter? I really don\'t know...but I\'ll definitely keep reading.
I hope you don\'t mind a little constructive criticism, but here are a few ways you could improve the first chapter:
1. It would be nice if you started a new line when there\'s dialogue; it would make things easier to follow.
2. Watch out for your spelling and grammar in a few places...ex. near the end you wrote \"im\" instead of I\'m. Maybe you could type up your stories on Microsoft Word (if you don\'t already) and use the spelling and grammar check to edit any mistakes, or you could get a beta.
=)

I\'m so happy that you\'re back, I\'ve been waiting forever for you to update. This is so good, please update soon!

I am so glad you\'re finally back! I loved this fic on Animespiral, but that site is so hard to read because of the tiny font and that weird color scheme- green and yellow? Yuck! Honestly, you were the only reason I went to that site at all. I am happy to hear you will be updating Traitor\'s Embrace soon too- will that one be on this site as well? Anyway, I love this fic and its great to finally hear from you again. I can\'t wait to re-read this one and more of your other fics too. This is one of my favorite WHR stories!