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for Accidentally in Love

by YamiBakura

person Angelike
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find it interesting that the members of Schwarz are actually going out of their way to help Omi. It\'s rather strange (makes me feel like I\'m missing something), but in a good way. Really, it\'s a nice change of pace. I am enjoying your story greatly, and I look forward to reading the next chapter. I hope you\'ll update soon.
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is such a cool story! But I don’t like it, I LOVE IT! PLEAZE CONTINUE!! I’m begging you (and that means It’s one hell of a story)
-Silentdepths
person Liz
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You shouldn\'t say your writting is bad coz its not. its a great story the \'Romeo and Juilet\' play doesn\'t matter its your story and no one else\'s. \'Romeo and Juilet\' have been done over and over again but does that matter? As long as its a good story then thats fine and this is a great story. I hold you to that promise to update in a week otherwise...well you don\'t want to know. this is the first Weiss story i have read and i love it. Keep up the good work.
person Alex
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely piece of work. I\'m thoroughly enjoying it and hope to see you continue. While I agree that the two are falling in love too fast, this is a piece of fiction and you can\'t drag it out over a long period of time. Besides, your two main characters are teenagers, that means love at first sight and all that good rot (at least until they grow up and find out what a wasteland real life is).

The only complaint that I have is the way that Schwarz and Weiss are taking to your lovebirds being together. Maybe to heighten the drama, you should have both groups at each other\'s throats about who can\'t control their teenager (can you imagine the family reunions?).
person Seket
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I Love this! DON\'T LET OMI DIE!!!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!
person Millia Rage
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls update this fic!!! hehehe...I love OxN...!!!!!! ^_____________^

GOOD LUCK!!!! don\'t you dare stop this!!!!!!! >=(
person Kitten-chan
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Brilliant!! Cant wait for the next part!!
person lady_kail
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start! I had this BIG, cheesy grin on all the way through it.
You ARE planning on continuing, aren\'t you?
person CianaRui
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop a line and let you know I am loving this concept. I also am rather fond of the the title. Please post more I am curious to see if everyone involved survives the staging of \"Romeo and Juliet\".

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