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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pleasepleaseplease updateeeeeeeeeeee i love this story.
needmore electra.
needmore electra.
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Well, first I must say, this is one of the better lemons I\'ve read; classy, well-written, but not too slow in getting to the action.
The best advice I can give you is to lay off the thesarus a little, mmkay? Big words are all well and good, but you go a little overboard with them at times. Remember...this is a lemon, not an academic essay. No need to show off vocabulary.
Also, Spike\'s \"Yum\" had to be the cutest moment of any lemon I\'ve ever read. You\'re awesome; keep up the good work!
Well, first I must say, this is one of the better lemons I\'ve read; classy, well-written, but not too slow in getting to the action.
The best advice I can give you is to lay off the thesarus a little, mmkay? Big words are all well and good, but you go a little overboard with them at times. Remember...this is a lemon, not an academic essay. No need to show off vocabulary.
Also, Spike\'s \"Yum\" had to be the cutest moment of any lemon I\'ve ever read. You\'re awesome; keep up the good work!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D-D-D-DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!!!! :-D AKA h-h-h-hoooooooooooooooott!!! lol
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, BANG is right! what an awesome lemon!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That\'s was great! It\'s the first ever CowboyBebop fiction i\'ve read! Good use of wording, i liked that little trust bit just before the lemon (awww) :)
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, hot stuff! I think they need to keep going :) BTW, what color\'s \"puce,\" anyway? I always thought it was supposed to be a yucky color?
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!! HELL, YES!!!!!!!! YES x INFINITY!!!!!!!!! lol Sorry, but I LOVE this pairing and have yet to see more of it!!! So thanks a gazillion times for writing a lemon b/w the two! Oh...and it rocked, btw. ^_^
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow...will there be more of this little treasure? =-) It was really well-written, and I, personally, really like Electra. Move over, Faye! Wow, I can\'t believe I just said that...I LOVE Spike/Faye! =-/
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, keep up the good work. I was wondering if there was going to be another chapter.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that\'s pretty good