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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's an interesting idea of what happened in between scenes. I like it. Good job.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know that story always in particular I wanted to see a pairing of. Even if it majorly deviated from the manga. It's a twist that you've added, but I really do wish it had been longer and a bit more to it. But yours does add a darkness to the idea.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this, it was awesome. I think maybe you should revise it though and make it longer, the shortness took away from it. Make it longer with more sex and it will be A. O.K! LOL! Thanks for making a P-Chan/ fic this is awesome, i\'ve never seen another like it. SWEET!