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for Life, Death, and a Change of Seasons

by USuki

person Jenny
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damnit you don't see many good Shigure stories around.

Please update.
person a random reader
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well done; i\'ve always liked the thought-patterned style of writing. the only thing is the author\'s note at the end; it effectively kills the mood. other than that, it\'s very good. keep it up!
person Les
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer, Suki. You depict things so easily, and vividly. I was in tears during most of it. Because it was amazing and well written. I loved it, even though a lot of woman-man sex was involved...but I\'m so glad to have read your works. I love it all. Thankyou so much.

~Les
Speaketh the Truth.
person Snowfall
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very nice piece of work, despite the small number of mistakes. It flows. I like the first person POV. It\'s very difficult to write. A nice tribute to the author you mentioned.

Snowfall
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I would have never thought of Shigure as suicidal but I guess everyone thinks about, even if they don\'t act on it. I love how this story is a journey through his final, erratic thoughts, memories and fantisies. Keep up the good work and I\'m gonna keep my eye out for more of your work.
person Finality
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an... odd story, but very \"deep.\" Very OOC; keep writing, though. I enjoyed that story very much. ;3
person chica
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my freakin gosh! that scared the freakin crap out of me! DANG! lots of feeling in that story, no? dang. i gotta go read somethin...
person Naria
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'d say go for the one-shot chappies from each person\'s perspective! It\'ll make it more interesting and meaningful that way instead of a jumbled mix of all thoughts at once! Not to mention the fact I love the format you\'ve chosen! ^_^ It gives me warm fuzzies...In a creepy kind of way...yeeeahhhh....Anyway, I\'d like to see more from you just to see how much you can stab into the human psyche, because that\'s what it felt like! Only, not with something sharp, it was more like a dull rusty spork carving into my mortal fear of helpessness, hoplessness, and depravity. Don\'t you hate it when you\'re reminded of being an imperfect fucked up human?! Gyargh! But I guess it\'s mortality that makes us appreciate happiness and pain...But the fact that we\'re human makes us greedy for emotion. DAMMIT! >.< NO MAS!


Speaking of the Pope, why did they elect and OLDER one?
person Suki
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... now there\'s a thought. I never considered writing a sequal. Maybe I will... Should it be a series of psychological one shots or in a story format? Of course then I\'d have to be depressed... Sorry Pope, you\'re death didn\'t effect me like Hunter S. Thompson\'s... of course the Pope didn\'t kill himself. That would be interesting if he did though, suicides are damned in the cathloc church, but I digress. Thoughts, comments? lemmie know.
person Naria
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe I have found someone who understands me! You are AMAZING! That story was just so deep and beautiful and I could definitely tell it was Shigure from the start! I mean, you goota think that he\'s got to have SOME issues! I really love how beautifully you wrote his \'insanity\'! I adore stories that delve into the darker recesses of character\'s minds! I say Bravo! BRAVO! As significant as that ending was, I think you you write about the family\'s reaction to Shigure\'s death. Don\'t rescue him, that would ruin it! But I\'d want to see how the Aya and Haa-san would react, and see the reprecussions of his decison in the family...

GOOD STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomp*

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