rate_review Reviews

Is it Just me, or do these chapters seem to be getting shorter and shorter? Rawr, if I didn't know better I'd think you were trying to make me go mad. When I first read this work of yours, I became so engrossed that though I had to hop on the train whilst in the middle of reading, I couldn't get it out of my head. I had to read more. I was compelled. I am still compelled, and I continue to reread this over and over, waiting for some closure. Haunted always by the possibilities the plague me as to the ending. This is begging you with beating heart, please write more.

You are the best writer for this pairing I have ever seen. Having hunted it down in many places I can say that with certainty. I commented on the DA version of this, but I felt the AFF version also deserves love. I mean, I've never been so into a fanfiction before! You really are the awesome!

I honestly have to say that you have a true gift when it comes to writing. You paint your scenes with words like an artist paints them with a paintbrush; there are so many points when I'm reading where I'm both inspired and awed by your ability. One thing's for sure, whenever I see the title of this fic, the first thing that comes to my mind is that beautiful scene with Zenigata and Lupin in the clearing under the moonlight, where Pops is digging up the earth with his fingers. I don't know why, that just struck me as being the most beautiful thing I've ever read. Not only that, you evoke such powerful emotions with your writing as well...*tries to hide kleenex box* It's so easy to make two characters exchange "I love you's", but to build love between them instead is something entirely different, and you've mastered it. Neither Lupin nor Zenigata needs to say it aloud in this fic, honestly, because it's so undeniably clear. Lupin smashing the glass in this chapter was a perfect example of one of those nonverbal expressions, plus you wrote it without it seeming cliched, which was excellent as well.

I swear, I could sing your praises for several paragraphs...but for some reason, words are failing me. As always, you have my admiration and adoration as a fellow writer.

Highest Regards,
Florville

WOOT! :D Love it! can't wait for the next chapter! ;)

You have no idea how much I enjoy this story, and you leave me at a cliff hanger like that. It's cruel! I'll be watching for updates!

Yay! ^.^ sweet! can't wait for more! ;)

AWSOME!!!! I really liked this! You made it nce and ..smut-ful, but kept the detail in! A rare thing! KEEP IT UPP!!!!
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lol
"you were on my foot"

that was great...so very..perfect of them ^_^

I LOVE this story! Please keep up the excellent work. I love Zenigata and Lupin together (they make a good couple)!

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GAH!!!!!!

Keep writing


poor pops....omg.


no no no!!!