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Yes, yes, yes! Sequel sounds great. And your Schu is delicious. Long write you!

Oh, you dog! You dirty dog...That\'s all I can even think right now. Normally, as I\'ve told you, I don\'t like Schu in pairings...but damn........

It was very well written and I can\'t wait to see what else you manage to come up with. You explore some interestin\' ideas about the boi\'s and I can just imagine what would happen if and when Schu, Yohji and Aya get together!

I\'m counting on ya to let me know when you next post...I really can\'t wait!

Nice. Very nice, indeed. If things turn out like they should, we will have some threesome! Right? ^^\'
I like these two new parts, they - \'make sense\' aren\'t the right words. *thinking* Fit? Perhaps that. Schuldig is his always-wonderfully-bastard-himself and Aya is full of surprises. Oh, you described the Iceland _really_ nicely. It\'s fantastic! (Gotta try to draw it someday...) All the black ice and that... Phew. (I\'m actuallly shaking. Gosh.) Oh, where was I anyway?
The interlude II... Hmm. Hmm-hmm. Now I can\'t tell how things turn out. I\'ve got no idea. And how is Yohji going to react to all this? I mean that Aya\'s been taken by Schuldig... Is he going to blame Schuldig for something? For using Aya?
Hope you get the third chapter ready soon! *smile*

You know you\'re good, don\'t you? The story is hot, keep writing, please.

Bravo! When I started reading \"Scharfe\" I was afraid this was turning into another abuse-Aya-fest, but I should have trusted you not to take the common road.

Again - two great chapters! It seems that Schuldig is playing match-maker while still getting what he wants. I also thought your portrayal of Aya, his icy defences and the way they were battered down was very believable.

One - tiny - quibble. The line \"I was treated to the site of his naked ass\" should be \"I was treated to the sight of his naked ass\". \"Site\" refers to a location or place, \"sight\" has to do with the eyes and seeing. Like I said, it\'s a tiny quibble in an otherwise fantastic piece of writing.

I\'ll be keeping watch for further updates!

Double Yum! X3

An upcoming threesome between Schu, Yotan and Aya..? Always my favorite.

That was intense. I like it, and I\'m glad you can see Schu not just as a jackass but as a person who feels just like we do. You portrayed both Schu and Yohji very well and I am anticipating your update to this.

Oh my dear sweet God. *broad smile* I just love this one, it can\'t be denied. This is going to be interesting - what is Schu going to do about Yohji wanting Aya? What does Aya do? And what is Yoji going to do with Schu wanting him? Anyhow, I like you characters. Even though Schu might be a bit OC, it doesn\'t matter. In the beginning the way he spoke was a bit odd, but he became better later. ^^ I wish you update soon. Want to see how this ends (and read more sex between Schu and Yotan - has anyone ever told you that you write it almost perfectly?)

I love a good Yohji/Schuldig fic and this is truly excellent. I do hope that Schuldig isn\'t going to turn all mushy and love-struck, but I believe that however you round out this arc, it will be a great read.

And yeah, it was Takatori who handed out the golf-club beating, not Crawford. The leader of Schwarz stepped in to prevent his two team mates being literally clubbed to death.

Other than that, I feel spoiled at having found another excellent writer for this fandom and pairing. Thanks for sharing your work.

Thank you for the kind reviews. I stand completely corrected on the club issue. Thank you for pointing it out. Have no fears that Schuldig will get all mushy. I don\'t do sap. I\'m physically incapable of it. Dangerously obsessed bordering on psychotic, sure (none of the Weiss or Schwartz boys are screwed very tight). SAP,WAFF not in this life time while I still have all my facaulties. Be patient, part 2 is coming soon (with my beta as we speak) and I\'m currently writing part 3.