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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hot. I feel a bit bad for Schuldig now, he\'s so into Yohji and Y. just wants to get Aya ...
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, that was very intense, and I loved it! I would love to see more. Great job!!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum! *faints*
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright, so far i\'m enjoying the fic immensely, that was a nicely done smut scene...smut chapter, and i like the way you\'re handling their personalities. that said, there are two little, nearly ingisnificant details that are bothering me.schuldig\'s outfit squicked me, but that was probably the suspenders. and, crawford didn\'t beat schu-schu with the golf club, takatori did. as far as i can tell, in the canon schu and crawfoo are friends. eh...no one else seems to really notice that though. even when they\'re fucking they still hate each other in most fics. it\'s weird. anywho, i like-y da fic and i want to see more.
did aya not know yohji was gay? has he ever seen him in tight leather pants and a mesh top before? is aya really stupid? okay, so maybe yohji\'s technically bi, but really i think that\'s just him denying how blatantly gay he is.
did aya not know yohji was gay? has he ever seen him in tight leather pants and a mesh top before? is aya really stupid? okay, so maybe yohji\'s technically bi, but really i think that\'s just him denying how blatantly gay he is.