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This is quite possibly the most sickeningly sadistic yet brillintly written bit of psychological, sexual, and spiritual non-con I have ever read. I love it and I hate myself for loving it. I wish we had favorites here, but as it is I will save this. And the narration is very unique. Rarely do I see fics with the "you" thing going on.

There's just one word I can say, so I'll say it bluntly. Beautiful. It was... amazing. <3

I thought I will never find a good Muraki/Hisoka fanfic. I was so wrong. The story is great. A little dark, little gloomy, but still... very good. I love the metaphors you use and Muraki\'s thoughts, and some of the sentences... great. Very good. I enjoyed reading the story. Thank you so much for this great fanfic.

wow...i dont think i\'ve read a better muraki\'s view story
veryvery nice
captures everythin
*bows in ur presence*

Very well written. I found myself engrossed in the story. You managed to bring out thoughts that most people dread to think and are repulsed when they do. Kudos.

SQUEE!!!!!!! That was amazing! You got Muraki down so well! Aww poor soka though....very well done! More please!

.......wow....this fanfic is AWESOME!! I can\'t believe you wrote something like this...and by your self? Wow...holy cra...I never thought I\'ll actually finda fanfic that has rape is is detailed!. One small problem I hate to say, but Muraki never got his orgasm...like in Hisoka. THey only did hot blow obs and stuff. Oh maybe you should write that in the next chapy?....I kinda think there isn\'t gonna be one cause it sounds like it ended. Aww this is one of those one shots right? With no sequel what -so-ever? Aww man....I hate it when the best fanfics ohnly has one chappy.....such a letdown. Well I\'m hoping that you\'ll have more stories or that you\'ll make more! It would br great! Youshould be a writer someday. Ooops now I\'m babbling! Well that was a ride reading your story! ^^ I congratulate you!

AMAZING! I love the way you\'ve characterized Muraki in here, he\'s perfectly done. And Hisoka, as well. This is just _beautiful_...sad, of course, but beautiful.

I just have to say that you did an outstanding job. I loved it keep up the great work.

This was really good. I\'ve read a lot of pre-manga Muraki/Hisoka relationships, but this one was the best by far. All the small details and the way you worded it... wow... I\'m speechless with awe. The imaging was so vivid to my mind and the writing was beautiful. You must write more. Maybe a sequel to this during the manga/anime timeline when Hisoka becomes a shinigami and meets Tsuzuki? Consider it at least? Can\'t wait to read more of your future works.