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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I'm very intrigued to see were you take this story.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well the story is good I really like it. Was glad you finally updated the story after a couple of months well its better that saying you will update but don`t oh well I really like your story so keep up the good work oh yeah I perfer reading stories with male and female and sometimes female ad female pairing but I don`t read stories with YAOI I have nothing against it its not the kind of stories I perfer to read oh well keeep up the good work and update soon
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice aspect you've got going on here. Realistic scenes. It's not going too fast, nor too slow. So bravo!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*raucous applause* about time u got up off yaw ass on this one :P *hug* congratulations on ur new chapter. the fleshing out process is going rather well. flesh...heh. ahEm. i hope this spurt of feverish creativity is sustainable and j00 write more... WRITE MORE!!!! *blushes... * i should buckle down and do some work on MY story... u give me incentive! *is all fired up* and some action at last! (no matter how breif :P *blasts off to right teh ebil shmex scene* uh, quick question b4 i go, why do i type with emticons? :S
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. i hope that i get to read more of it soon!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good~ yu should write a lot more!! <33
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. You\'re building up great anticipation. Your teasing moments are nice you should write more of those.
For future fics, you\'ve got Rei\'s and Minako\'s personalities completely switched. Minako is behaving as Rei\'d do, and vice versa.
For future fics, you\'ve got Rei\'s and Minako\'s personalities completely switched. Minako is behaving as Rei\'d do, and vice versa.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finally read the second chapter. It\'s good so far. I\'m sure it will get more intruiging as time goes on. It does have an air of mystery to it which is good. It sets the emotions forth for the characters. Some pointers, since you\'re using their Japanese names, the Japanese always use their last names first before their first names when introducing themselves to someone. Just thought you\'d like to know. ^^
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, very intruiging! Well written and excelent plot! Please continue to update.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this si ok i guess AFF isnt for compelling storyline anyway lets see some action.