rate_review Reviews

I\'m sorry it took me so long to read this. I finally got a chance to. The drama in this was very good as were the descriptions. I\'ll admit I was a bit surprised at reading some of the more detailed parts, but then again it\'s adult fiction, lol. I guess I\'m more used to the words penis and vagina.. stuff like that.. ^^; The plot seems to be hidden somewhat, but that\'s good. It brings out the curiousity in the reader. All in all, I think you write very well and have a wonderful sense of imagination.

Will be interesting to see how this develops... tantalizing bits here and there get the juices flowin... cant wait to see how the writer... er... fleshes out his story. :)
hoorray for boobies and thongs!!!!

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