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by Lennith

person Rena-nena
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chortling nonstop behind her hand* Oh my gosh... Poor, Tachi-kun. *so saw him tripping over his feet* XDDD!! He is so... too cute! >< Was Ringo-chan wearing those spectacles afore? I can\'t remember...

Monica! *does an Orochimaru and wraps herself around her angel* You, being the wonderfully talented, sweet, kind, caring, loving young woman that you are (did I overdo it? XD) should draw a picture, mebbe just a lil\' sketch, of yer wonderful lil\' Ringo-chan~ Ne, ne ne~? ^-^
person Gothic_Kaiba
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi hi!!! XD Yes, I\'m totally a new reviewer. With the help of this wicked awesome fic, I learn more about the characters! I can\'t wait to see the next chappy. It\'s so funny and heartwarming I just wanted to cry in the end. Oo; Hm. I normally don\'t cry during weddings. Oh well! This was just too overwhelming to the minions in my mind. XD Thank you so much for the great fic!!!
person Rena-nena
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sneaks up behind Monica and thwaps her in the head* You\'re capable or writing fluff after all! Just teasing! ^~ It really was sweet, and I just love Ringo so much >< I dunno why... *just placed an order for the entire s.CRY.ed series for the price of one DVD* Gomen ne! I\'m trying to update Endless Bouts. Maybe I just need to tear it down and start all over...

Iya! *waves a hand* This review is all about you. Fabulous chapter... and as you know, I ALWAYS! (zutto) look forward to reading your work! *blows kisses* XoXoX
person RedHedLvr
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted you to know your loyal, and rabid at least in my case, fans are with ya all the way. Can\'t wait for the next chapter, but I still think there\'s something fishy about the Ringo character. Maybe I\'m just reading too much into him, who knows.

Just as a \"for thought\" item, why is it that the BRAVE reviewers who tear down something they personally don\'t like always type in caps and never leave their names? Are they AFRAID of having their opinions traced back to them? And where are their stories, posted for the world to see and possibly take pot shots at, hmmm?

Anyway, don\'t take that one review seriously. You have a following for your stories and I for one can\'t wait for more. Hang in there baby and hit us with your best shot!
person THEY WEREN\'T GAY!!
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY DO YAOI LOVERS INSIST ON RUINING PERFECTLY HET MALES WITH THIS DRIT? THEY WERE NOT GAY!!!
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wallows in teh fluffy* Might I just say... AWWWWWWWW!!!!

I\'m such a sucker for fluff. XD Yeah, it may be a bit OOC for these guys, but who cares! They were alone, they don\'t have to worry about anyone watching. ^_^
person RedHedLvr
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter did NOT suck! Don\'t even think that way. As much as I love the smutty goodness between these two, it makes the story a more interesting read and keeps me wanting more when the plot is developed more. I\'m not sure that came out right.

Anyway, that was so sweet. These two really have it bad for each other and the vows you wrote for them were so in character. It was great. And should I hate Ringo now or wait til later? I\'m not 100% sure of him and think Kazuma needs to keep a close eye on this cat. He\'s trouble, I just know it.

Good job, as always, and can\'t wait to read more!
person Shikan
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~! Honestly! I don\'t mind the fluff at all, and I liked this chapter as much as the earlier ones!

Whee, now they\'re officially married. Hehe.
person Quycksylver
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! So far the whole fic is really good, but this last chapter was the best--and I think you\'ve hit on the only thing that could possibly make It\'s a Small World bearable....boy on boy action! Yeah, that\'s exactly what that little pocket Purgatory needs! I only wish there\'d been something that interesting to look at when I got shanghai\'d onto the damn thing. XD
person shikan
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! It\'s so absolutely cute.

And if I ever go to Disneyland (which I highly doubt) I\'m not sure if I want to go to \'It\'s a Small World\' anymore... or then I do.

If I\'m as perverted as I am now.

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