rate_review Reviews

If anyone ever wondered about Washu\'s self-talk as she does her \"thing\", I think you hit the nail, dude. Technically marvelous. Wonderful details. But doesn\'t she realize that Nobuyuki (that hentai!) doesn\'t need any priming? He\'d jump her if she batted an eyelash his way.

You put a great deal of work into this and it shows. Can\'t wait for Ryoko\'s chapter...

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Good story, great idea. I like the idea of this pairing. Please continue with this.

Tehcnical view, you did a nice job. Both the pacing and description were well done.