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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have a unqiue writing style, with your constant shuffle of time periods and emotions. It was beautiful, like a dance of memories. Something that I could almost imagine swirling out of Kyo's mind when Hatori took his memories. It was sad, but something I could absolutely imagine had the manga taken a darker, less vanilla turn of events.
Thank you for writing this!
Thank you for writing this!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm truly impressed by this story. The emotions are very powerful. Great job!
Just a slight critique, though I get the feeling you've already heard this... Zakuro/Zakuto changed names in the middle of the story. And in the series, Akito's assistant is named Kureno. But you've probably already been told that. Either way, it still worked very well with the story.
Please, keep up the good work!
Just a slight critique, though I get the feeling you've already heard this... Zakuro/Zakuto changed names in the middle of the story. And in the series, Akito's assistant is named Kureno. But you've probably already been told that. Either way, it still worked very well with the story.
Please, keep up the good work!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Simply wow! I've read this story so many times and yet, each time I read it, I get goosebumps and my heart clenches in pain. This has to be the BEST Kyo-angst story I've ever read, anywhere! It's the best one on the internet.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really..stong i guess. it was intense and sad and beautiful and awful and a hundred other emotions, too. basically i loved it. i cried for a while. that was really tastefully done. thank you.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic. i great. I loved it and hope to see more fic.s from you. The fact that is went backwards made it really fit together and it was aesome. Kyo being scared and helpless like that is a twist that is very different but wih Akito being so cruel could see him doing that. Another unexpected part was Hatori living in a place like that and being a half drunk. Although many elements are not the norm. in this series all this fits really well and i loved it.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(crying and just generally making a scene)
Kyooooooooooooo!
(prints out pic of Akito and rips the head off) MREAH!!!!!!!!!!!
And that thing about Hiro-kun, poor, poor Hiro-kun too. IT'S UNJUST! GRARGEAGDHRTSJ!!!! (CORNER OF WOE/CORNER OF AKITO HATE)
Kyooooooooooooo!
(prints out pic of Akito and rips the head off) MREAH!!!!!!!!!!!
And that thing about Hiro-kun, poor, poor Hiro-kun too. IT'S UNJUST! GRARGEAGDHRTSJ!!!! (CORNER OF WOE/CORNER OF AKITO HATE)
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far the way you've portrayed the characters is wonderful. I can't wait for what happens next.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This nearly tore my heart in two. I had to fight myself to continue reading. I want to go and kill Akito now... very touching. I want desperately for Kyo to be okay again
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just reread this again! wonderfully done, beautiful realistic descriptions. keep up the great work! is there any chance for a sequel on this one?
kimper :)
kimper :)
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story...but so sad at the same time. Great work writing it.