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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You\'ve got a steady feel for the characters and they seem to be heading in a solid direction. A few confusing bits here and there with mispelling, but really, who doesn\'t have their own herd of spelling gremlins? Keep up the good work. I look forward to the up-coming chapters.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely should have run it through your editor first. But you have gotten me curious - just what did Sammy do that he had to all his sister for help on? Hope to see the answer soon! Laters!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has been a long time sents I wanting to read a SandD story like this. The one that I do read I get loss with in the secound chapter but you have hooked me and have pulled me in to you story THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. what a way to start a project. this truelly is the project from hell. update!!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It\'s going in a good direction but could use just a tad bit of editing. Lovely character building up. Try making the transitions just a little easie. Good luck. Great Story.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. This last chapter didn\'t have as many grammer errors as the first two so bravo to your beta. Please update soon and keep up the good work!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A rival for Serena\'s hand? Isn\'t that Prince diamond/Demando\'s job? And that\'s not considering Beryl\'s reaction, not that she really knew about Darien\'s true identity until after most of the hatchet had been buried, but still... Just got more interesting, please update as quickly as you can! Laters!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far.....Please up date.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you can just sense the impending disaster in the air... P.S.: You might want to work on your grammar just a bit. Laters!