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July 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
MAKE MORE, MAKE MORE WITH LONGER & MORE LOVE SCENES PLEASE
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Please continue the story.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s not shitty(as above reviewer said) it is just not well written.
1st. you need work on your sentence structure. Your sentences are fragments and end to suddenly or leave out words.
2nd.Even with a pwp, there is be SOME background scene info and talking, I started reading and they were just going at it. Get a beta and keep writing, you can only get better with practice.
1st. you need work on your sentence structure. Your sentences are fragments and end to suddenly or leave out words.
2nd.Even with a pwp, there is be SOME background scene info and talking, I started reading and they were just going at it. Get a beta and keep writing, you can only get better with practice.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its shitty and stupid