rate_review Reviews

Yea I love Akito as a male too and totally disregard what has happened in the manga. This was a good oneshot!

I am awe struck. The poetry in your words and the cryptic under tones of the dialouge made this fic a very enjoyable read. Tohru was a bit out of character, but you did a fine job of explaining how she was able to change into such a different person. And your words, "Tohru is beyone Tohru"

I also found it interesting how you potrayed Hatori. Though most Fanfic authors nobilize him, you managed to keep him perfectly into character: weak and cowardice. Wanting change but never moving a finger.

The last line should almost be put into parenthesis. I was satisfied with your conclusion just before the last astrick line, but the mention of their child is important as well. Still, I can't help but feel as if I'm hanging on that last bit. What is the girl's name? What will become of her?

Overall, this is a very well written piece and of a professional caliber. Thank you for a good read.

Very good! Is it a one shot or will there be more?

this has got to be one of my favorite akito/torhu stories! anyways, hope you update soon!

Wow! This is such an artful fic! I adore this! This is my first time reading an Akito X Tohru fic and I must say, I am more than impressed. Really, I adore this!

nice! if there is another chap update soon

Woah. Woah. That was so amazingly written. In character, too. Facinating, with a heavy morbidity. The ending line was wonderfully creepy.

hey... that waz so intersting... pleaz continue... :)

This story was very fascinating yet dark in a way. There\'s no other way I could put it. I kept readng it over and over, and I still get that weird sensation... like sadness I guess. I don\'t know why, lol. I totally understood your story. I\'m guessing that if Akito gets bored with Tohru, he will leave her... but in the end after Tohru had her child, they\'re still at it. Lol. I love Akito&Tohru... this coupling is always so angst-y. I hope you will write more of this pairing. Good job btw!

T-T This was AWESOME! I loved it. Kind of like the stuff I write, but never post. Thanks for this, and im not going to ask for you to continue. its beautiful the way it is!