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I don\'t get it. What was that ending all about? What happened? I don\'t like guessing, I need stories to be straight forward. What exactly were their feelings toward eachother and the about pregnancy?

Loved it! ^_^

Wow, this was amazing. It\'s really difficult to find decent Akito x Tohru fanfics, but you definitely surpassed my expectations and made a wonderful one! *adds to recommended reading* This is an Akiru fic that cannot be missed, for sure. It has such a... an original take to it. It\'s very good. Akito is kept menacingly in character and Tohru is on the edge of falling out of character, while still being the onigiri we all love. I can\'t forget the way you wrote the sexual scenes, describing them so wonderfully without writing anything actually pornographic... well done! ^_^

oh my. who is the little girl?

i love these \'cant tell reality from fiction\' stories.

so confusing yet so lovely.

I love how you wrote this fic! It is awesome please keep writing I am going to wait for the next chapter and hope it will come very soon! I love it the characters and how you put them I love it...and its just like Akito! I hope you update soon! Please keep it up!!!!
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AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FREAKIN STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE OR I SHALL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JKJKJKJKJK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO REALLY... UPDATE... MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *COUGH COUGH...* HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *GRUNT...*

Hey! That was very well written (a nice change from the majority of the FB fanfiction here...) I am NOT a straight-couple shipper UNLESS the couple is taboo and disgusting, which this was, so I thought it was great. It\'s...uncomfortably arousing, you know? I really liked this. I wish it was a bit more nonconsensual but that is totally my gross preferance and has nothing to do with your skill. ><;; Very good. You have a smooth, direct way of writing and I enjoyed reading this very much. I could picture it, too. Definitely. So yes, awesome job. Please keep writing about dirty couples with large age gaps fucking in secret ^_^ Very enjoyable, and a good idea, as well. Keep up the awesome work.

Whoa! I think AFF cut off half of my review!!! Anyway...I very much enjoyed your writing style...sophisticated, smooth, and direct. I think both Tohru and Akito were perfectly in character, and it was believable as well. Great job! I hope you continue to write more glorious nastiness ^_^ I will swing by every now and then to see if you\'ve updated/written anything else. So keep it up! You definintely have a fan.

it was excellent, most magnificance (i think i spelled that wrong), i loved your style of writing and everything. Please continue with this story, you showed Akito\'s personality so perfectly. He is still dark even if he has a child and Tohru, i love it. Hope you write more.

That was a cool one-shot. I hope you do something new soon.