rate_review Reviews

Wow....that fiction was....just....wonderful!!! Your first fanfiction, you say?? Well, you did an incredibly good job!!! I had read fictions for at least 2 years before writing one, and my first one wasn\'t nearly this good!!! This is a great, great story and one of my first fics in the GetBackers genre!!! Please write a sequel, I think that one would be grand!!! You did a great job on this fiction and your a wonderful writer, keep it up, okay?? *hugs* I\'ll be looking forward to see if there is a chapter two. ^___^

Awsome
Kinda lost the motivation on who it was coming from for a second;
Ban or Ginji?
Anyway, nice story.

I, for one, would relish a sequel. There\'s a dearth of good Ban/Ginji out there, and this was as hot as it comes! Please write more!

NOOOO!!! MISS LADY BUG!!!! NOOOO!!!! *sniffle sniff* i lov-ed that car....*clears throat* i really enjoyed this story! it was hilariously sexy!!! i really would like to see another chapter to this to see about poor Miss Lady Bug....PLEASE??? *puppy eyes*

HOLY SHIT!! That is ONE hot fic!

I have been told that GB isn\'t yaoi, but with all that goes on in the anime, and the art in the artbook, I gladly disagree.

keep up the good work!

OMG WTF......Did he kill Ginji?!?!?! I\'m...kind of lost. O_O Holy shit...

oh dear god, please write a sequel. I reeealllly want to see how Ban explains this to Ginji. hee hee

Oh. My. God......

;;lets out a snicker;;

;;dies of laughter;;

That was SOOO GOOD!! Wow, hun, just..wow. I will admit to being VERY curious about how Ban is going to explain THAT to Ginji. It brings such delicious thoughts to mind! If not a part two, then I would definitely go for a sequel. It\'s definitely good enough for it.

Mmmm...I\'m definitely a happy lady now. ;;nods;; Yus, very happy. THANK YOU!

Holy shit!!! Now that was one hell of a quicky. WOW~ I\'m litteraly out of words. This fic was good!
Congrats on your first fic. You are one good author. I\'m happy to know you started writting with
a Ban/Gin fic cuz hell knows there is so few of them. (and that even though the serie is oh-so-slashable)
I hope you continue with this I would really like to know how it resolves (kekeke, lets see how Ban
explains to Ginji the details of this \"situation\") One thing though, if you ever plan on pursuing writting
boys smut; Spit fucks hurts!!! Really. Maybe try to incorporate a little lube somewhere. I know they didn\'t
actually do it and that it was a dream so i\'m guessing people don\'t usually dream of lubbing themselves ^_~
so no harm here yet but just in case. I\'m saying this cuz I cringe everytime I read a fic where the boys fuck on
spit only or worst, with no prep or lube at all and also in hope to read more of that sweet Ban/Gin story and
for you to make it trully amazing. Hope my little critic didnt get you down, I meant no harm, really just
suggesting something for it to become a perfect fic. Tehee ^_^ Please, please keep up the good work
(err...I know im cheezy!) I love your writting style, you have a way with words that so few have dont let it go to waste.

I really hope to read from you again soon (but hey no rush, ur the artist I know those things takes time)


the most-likely-to-become-one-of-your-loyal-fan,

-MoOdSwInG

P.S. Sorry for the bad grammar and spelling, its late and english is my second language.

That was your FIRST stab at a fanfic? The language, the descriptions, the holy shit HOT SEX! How do you do that on a first try?! Good job!