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person Scorpinac
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, quite satisfactory. Very well done. And the reunion of Chibi-Usa and Hotaru was a nice touch, quite moving. Moving on to book 2, now. Laters!
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY, good job, was rini talking about her boyfriend??? anyway I enjoyed(rini irratates me lol, that is why she is always missing in my stuff) but so far in this story you have her acting more mature about how old is she suppose to be at the end of your story and hotaru in the future how old is she,

I will be waiting on the next story.
person Scorpinac
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Translation: Endymion was working up the nerve to tell her at the time, and Queen Serenity and Luna were going to discuss it, but the final battle of the moon happened almost a second later, and, well, they never got the chance...bummer... Well, a rousing addition, and hopefully Usagi will forgive him, with a lit of luck... Well, I look forward to the next chapter, Ja\'ne!
person Deep Serenity
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very good, one of the few Crystal tokyo fics that makes some sense and flows well, it was a good read and when I get more time I will read the other parts
person Scorpinac
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'m a little confused. Are you following the Anime continuity, or the Manga? Cause I know she did come back a third time in the Manga, but at a point after the Animamates/Evil Senshi had already pretty puch everybody on Galaxia\'s orders. But I don\'t recall a third trip in the Anime(unless you\'re counting her sudden change of heart about going home right at the end of S as a separate trip, which could work...I guess...). As to the story, intrgiung, enveloping, and here\'s hoping they get it all resolved in time! Ja\'ne!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hoo, boy. How do you exlain something like that to a child? Well, doing well so far, hope for an update soon!
person ~Moon-Daisuke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job this story is interesting. I am curious about what they learned, everyone mad at Mamo-chan. As usual, great work, keep it up and I will be patient for more. :)

~Moon-Daisuke

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