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for Capturing the Butterfly

by shuiede

person sesshy_lover
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THATS IT... I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY, ITS OFFICIAL!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I STILL HAVE A HANGOVER FROM WHEN I READ CHAPTER 4!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOO KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR I WILL HAVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^
person sonia
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome told ya you can do it. i can see misao kicking aoshi, cool. poor aoshi didnt even realize he has been kicked by he soon to be wife hahahahha. really awesome, i like it. cant wait to see his face when he learns who she really is huh. update soon.
person sesshy_lover
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IM GIVING YOU FAIR WARNINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS NOT A THREAT IT IS A FRIENDLY SUGGESTION... ^-^ HEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO REALLY UPDATE OR ELSE ALL YOUR FANS WILL GO ON A STRIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person janet
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!! IM DYING HERE!!! i keep checking to see if you update every DAY, every HOUR, every MINUTE, every SECOND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT YOU STILL WONT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RUGAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ILL KILL SOMEONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SERIOUSLY PLEASE UPDATEEE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM GONNA GO INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ROARRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY UPDATE NOW OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND TAKE YOU TO MY HOME AND TIE YOU UP IN A CHAIR NEST TO A COMUTER AND POINT A DAGGER A YOUR THROAT WHILE YOU WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! no, im just joking... but seriously!!!!! UPDATEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHOULD I SING FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!!!??? ~SINGING: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON OH BABY YEAH!!!!!!! COME ON KEEP AT IT NOW OR ILL BE SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ REALLY LAME BUT I WAS SINGING THAT... SO HURRY UP BEFORE I HUMILIATE MYSELF AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!! YOU\'RE STILL NOT UPDATING!!!!!!!!!... IM WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person butterfly
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!! YOU FRIGGEN ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ PLEASE WRITE MORE THOUGH... ~.~ BECAUSE PEOPLE WILL GIVE UP ON FANFICS IF IT TAKES TOO LONG... BUT I WILL KEEP READING DONT WORRY!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL MY FRIENDS READ TOO!!!!!!!!!! LIKE SESSHY_LOVER AND SUM1 ELSE!!!!!!... ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person holy_princess
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truely admire this piece... However, I must suggest that if Misao learned that Aoshi was a player, she wouldn\'t give into him so easily and that would cause further problems, dont you think so? Don\'t let Misao give in easily or else it will surely be dull... make him force her into loving him... or something... like that... ^-^
person sesshy_lover
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED MOREEEEE!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE OR ELSE ILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *COUGH COUGH!!!* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!... ~SILENCE~ HAHA...HA... *GRUNT...* OK... JUST UPDATE...
person sonia
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like the story so far but there is one thing i hope that will not happen that misao giving into aoshi easily it just makes me feel like that women are weak infront of men when it come to lustful desires, i would rather love to aoshi suffer for not getting what he wants until misao is ready to give it to him and specially when they are both in love with each other. making aoshi suffer will be alot fun u know as he has been getting whatever he wanted for such a long it is just a time for change :D. but hey that was just a suggestion, why would u listen to me its your fic afterall.
person Kit
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic. I can not wait to read what happens next since Aoshi will finally meet the \"maiden\" Carry on, it is great.
person arisa
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your story so far. although i hope there will be more aoshi and misao in the next chapter. anyway good job and please update soon^_^

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