rate_review Reviews

Omg. I absolutly love this fic. I just read the whole thing today. Its amazing. Is there any chance for a sequel.

This story is great. However I only have one issue with it. It may be nitpicking, but the national age of consent is 13. Now each prefecture also has a different age of consent, which ranges from 13 to 17, but another quirk of Japanese law is that the law defines “true” sexual conduct as that between men and women, and not to be confused with “imitation” between those of the same sex (rather homophobic of them I'd like to add), as part of the "Prostitution Protection Act". Therefore Shuichi and Eiri's relationship would hypothetically be legal. This is fanfiction, so it's not a big deal, but I thought you would like to know!

I absolutely love this story. *smiles*

Oh wow. Just wow. I am so intrigued.

i also think there were quite a few loose ends also...like i wanted to know how hiro and suguru reacted to finding out what shu was and also something more with eiris family...maybe a reaction from his family when they found out whoeiri was seeing...also i wanted to know what shus parents thought of the situation also

Points for a happy ending, but there were some loose ends that you could've tied up better...such as Shuichi's parents' reactions to the birth of the baby (and what they'd do afterwards) as well as Ryuichi's response. I guess I was expecting more drama from the family and to see that nothing was really resolved was disappointing. Overall, good fic though. Thanks for the good read.

Hey, I just wanted to say good job on finishing this story, it was one of the best Gravitation fanfictions I've ever read, even if the timeline of them falling in love was really short. I love your portrayal of the characters, and I check out your other stories as well. I really like the obsessive neighbor one, it was the first one I read from you. You should keep writing Gravitation fanfictions, because you're one of the few sources I can count on for excellent Gravitation fanfictions :)
Keep writing awesome stories!

I think im going to cry...this was my favorite fic and its over grrr...sooo sad now i have nothing else to read...would it be too much to ask to do a sequel

Wow, that was a great chapter thank-you for posting....

SEQUEL TIME, FOR BOTH STORIES!!! YOUR STORIES ARE THE BEST, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!