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for On the Street of Dreams

by Chocho

person xunxin
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAHHHHH!!!
WAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
WAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!
WAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
WAAAAAHHHH!!
got a tissue? oh how sad for shu. his father is an asshole!!
oh by the way, EIRI EIRI EIRI EIRI EIRI!!
NOt taki or Kizaou, that would just be discussting if you ask me.
but then again it could be one o them then shu looses the beby but the he gets preg aagain by eiri.
yep that would be a great story
LOL!!
person catmum56
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that Shindou-san is running true to form. What a jerk. Oh, wait, this is AFF! I can say he\'s a shithead!! I like the scene between Tatsuha and Ryuichi. Their emotions are well-played. And lastly, vulnerable Shuichi. So much to go through at 16. Poor little guy. Hope Tatsuha finds him in time to get him to his 4pm doctor\'s appt. That would be a good thing. :)
person Reader
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my absolute favorite!!! Please give me more!!! *puppy eyes*
person Akemi
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really cruel ;_;

I love cruelty ^^, followed with a proper happy end of course! I also love mpregs so pleaseeeeee the baby\'s father have to be Eiri!!!! He\'s already stated his distaste about males getting pregnant, imagine if the baby isn\'t his! Please write the next chapter as soon as you can!

Wish you lots of inspiration!
Akemi

schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that you are dealing with the social issues male pregnancy would raise.

As for who should be the father, all I will say is that having Eiri be the dad would be a little cliche, but in the end it\'s your story and you have to write it the way you feel is best.
person thescream18
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please update soon. I\'m in love with this fanfiction and would like very much to read more.
I\'ll be your best friend.
:) :) :)
person Quichi
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So many people bastardise Taki and ASK, I\'m rooting for him to mellow. Especially if he thinks it\'s possible he\'s the father. It would be cool if he was a competition for Shuichi, make Yuki wake up about his feelings!
person Shadow Rayn
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope the baby isnt taki\'s (it\'d be better if it was kizou\'s but only slightly). Please let eiri come to his senses! oh n i have a question. How can a woman be a neutral, since you said eiri\'s mother was one in ch.4. Im jus curious.
person wendyghost
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, poor shu ! hope this ends up well for him! yuki got to be the father! i hope!
person me
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon

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