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for On the Street of Dreams

by Chocho

person catmum56
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAcccckkkkkkk! Okay, that was stupid, but really, what a place to leave us! I\'m so happy when I see how small the gauge is on the right side slide, but then it goes by so quickly. ::pout:: I appreciate the time you\'re taking to produce a quality product (and belive me, you are doing that), but the wait is sheer agony here! I know, patience builds character, right? No, you just like to torture us all. Oh, well, I just come back and read the current offering several times each week. Until next time...
person ladyfiend
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you.....are....by far......the most....EVIL....person........EVER! OMG! please update again soon. i nearly killed my keyboard by drooling all over it. hehe. seriously, this was an amazing and very TENSE chapter....can\'t WAIT for the next one. hope it\'s very soon! (^_^)
person Emily
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... finally mpreg is here. Wohoo!!!! I hope Eiri wont be too angry to Shu-chan. It\'s not really Shu\'s fault he\'s preggers. I, by the way, totally love mpreg.
person xunxin
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya know that last comment made it sound like a tv show or something.
anyway great chapter.
so tat told ryu bout his brother?
well he didnt take it too well
..........GREAT CHAPTER I LOVED IT!!!!!
o y o y o y did you have to end it there?
NO FAIR!! more i want more.
i know i gotta wait til next week but thats just too long.
i want more!!!!
person Jade
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m looking forward to Yuki finding out about Shu\'s pregnancy and I hope that it changes his view of the situation. Pls. update soon.
person wendyghost
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this story update soon!
person Quichi
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love your story and I\'ve been folllowing it faithfully since you first published. PLEASE tell me Shuichi\'s potential pregnancy will come into it soon?? Please??
person inumoon3
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could Eiri say that? Poor Shu-chan...I can\'t wait till the next update, so update soon, okay!!!! Poor Shu-chan, I love men that have babies, Shu so don\'t worry!!!! Update soon!!!!
person catmum56
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sob:: How could Eiri say that to Shuichi?! Okay, I know Eiri\'s ignorant of Shuichi\'s sexual status and he has his own prejudice against neutrals, but sheesh! Great turn to the story. You\'re just making me want more, y\'know. Yummy as always... Oh, I think there\'s a word missing in one of the early paragraphs (if I remember correctly), but it\'s easy to fill it in. It\'s a little word (gee, that\'s a lot of help...) I\'ll re-read the chapter again, make a note of it and leave another review. Lucky you...
Seriously, I love your writing, but I\'m sure you\'ve figured that out by now.
person kagomegirl
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!!!! poor shu!!! i feel bad for him and i cant wait to find out what happens next. please update soon!!!

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