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Wahh!! It's so sweet, I can't believe it's completed. I loved it; every emotion, every twist and turn. And now... Will there be a sequel?

Love the two chapters and can not wait for the next one. I guess it's the wedding uh. keep up the good work, this story have been the best one i have ever read. Hope u make more storys like these. Merry christmas to u and a happy new year.

wow.
*wipes away a tear*
that was so cute and.......CUTE!
I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT.
this is one of those rare stories that i can go back and reread a million times, never getting sick of it.
awesome job on your part!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE OVER?
SEQUEL?
REALLY?
YEAH! HAPPY DAYS!!
I actually didnt notice the old title until you said so.
anyway, hurry up with the next story!!
love ya sis!

awwwww kawaii!! this was one of the best fics i have read in a while of gravi. soo sweet!! ha i bet eiri IS related to eric lol. wouldnt that just be funny. ooh i do hope shu has at least one more child. *grin* eiri's baby would be soo kawaii!!! great job!!

Chpt 23: Interesting turn of events. Hrm... I don't see how Shu asking for a long engagement will help their case - they will still be unmarried and he's still a pedophile in the eyes of the law - also how is he of legal age of majority at 17 is that the legal age in Japan for marriage because everything I've seen says that 20 is the age of majority in Japan. Also, by 12 weeks he would be showing especially with how thin he is :/ --- I really have enjoyed the story even if my reviews haven't perhaps always conveyed it, I was just hoping to give you more feedback than "its gr8t plz hurry" :) I can't wait to see what you write next - maybe a sequel to this as there is so much more to tell (more fun happy stuff :) instead of all that angst!). Thanks for posting!

Great chapter please keep going would love to read more....I love the married thing that was good....*wants more*

LOL!
seriously, that was hilarious!
i not sure y yet but it was.
but how dare you end it there
i know i was already way long as it is but still.
come on!
oh well
cant wait til next chap next week.
...
o no, it be over next week
NNOOOOOOOO! *big sob*

yay! more more more more


lovely chapter...loved the way it ended, lol!

Yay marriage! Are you sure there's no chance of the baby actually being Eiri's? The doctor said she wasn't sure if it was 11 weeks... it could be nine...

ok that was simply awesome but i have a question
im confused
i dont get the part about you making up taki's "real name" for a reason
doesn't make sense
anyway
great chapter
hate you for ending it there
but it was still cute
aw they kissed in front of them
how adorable
update soon