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Chpt 22: I liked this chapter better than the previous two. It seemed a little more real. I think I'm going to gag when Eiri askes them to let him marry shu even though he's only known him less than 3 months, thats just kinda stupid. Oh well - hope it ends well!

Keep it up would love to read more....

I've only read the first chapter, but I'm interested. It's not so often you stumble across a story like this. Quick question... Why neutrals? Why not intersexed? That's what we like to be called. And yes, you're right, there are a lot more of us than one might expect. The last statistic I read was about 5 percent of births are intersexed. That's a lot! (who would guess that that exceptionally girly looking girl in your philosophy class has a penis? or at least part of one, or was born with one... you know what I'm getting at.) Scholars like Butler argue that there are not only more than 2 biological sexes, but more than 3 sexes, that there is an infinate range between XY large penis, large scrotum, to XX small clitorus small labia. And of course everything in between. Unfortunately, there are only 2 socially acceptable genders to cram this variety of sexes into. Anyway, lemmie read the rest of your story...

yay an update i hope theres more soon to come

yeah
id say something worth while and all but
........
im just too hungry to care
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
PIZZA PIZZA

ok im back
yes of course i loved that chapter
SO AWESOME
lemon scene was so beautiful
(for lack of a better term)
sad with shus parents
father an ass hole
AW how sweet was that?
update soon
like friday
ok ill settle for next monday too *sad frown*

i think shu would be better off with ryu and tats anyways. i like how eiri told shu how he felt it must help shu to feel better and as cared for and most normal people would. keep it up and update again soon.

Great update! I loved it! Poor Ryuchi can\'t play big brother though. I can\'t wait to read about this \"little chat\"

aiyee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful! please update soon! can\'t wait to read more (^_^)

oooo im so curius, btw you know if a legal adult were to maryy a minor \\w said minor\'s parents\' consent the relation ship would be legal maybe thats whats going to happen oh well i can only wonder