rate_review Reviews

you update! YAY! and a pretty good chapter too. I just love this story

oooo fun
very cool
i loved it
I WANT MY PIZZA!!
hehehehehehe
man i was starting to hate ryu
what a pain he is
ooo yeah!
shu amd eiri had their little talk
great i love it
CHOCOLATE! YEAH! FUN TIMES!

Chpt 20: Is it 11 or 9 weeks? (you wrote both!). I will be very interested to see where you take this, if it ends soon (like it seems to be) or if you follow it out through Shu\'s pregnancy etc. I thought your Eiri was pretty OOC this chapter, but thats life. The whole you\'re carrying my son thing was pretty cliche :) I was like OMG how soap opera, but overall liked it! Can\'t wait to see where you are going with the parents.

Wow it\'s been a really long time since I\'ve reviewed, but only God knows how much I love this story! You are such a wonderful author, and your plots are the best! It\'s about time Ryu and Tatsu go and have a little chat with Ryu\'s parents. How come Ryu and Tatsu haven\'t married yet? Well anyway update real soon, cause I love this story so much!!!!!

Grrrr! NOT TAKI! CHANGE IT DAMMIT!

(otherwize very good)

At first, the whole drug/prostitution thing almost turned me off to the whole fic...but the way you kept everyone surprisingly in character despite those things make this realy great story. I\'m a little mad about the whole \"Shuichi might be carrying the fortunately late Taki\'s baby\" thing, but I\'ll wait and see how you make it up to us loyal readers, ok? Great dialogue, great descriptions, really great story...keep up the good work!

I really want to thank you for updating: I\'ve been checking back every day since the last chapter looking for an update! It\'s so nice for persistence to be rewarded. This chapter... seemed more like an interlude between what just happened and what will happen next than an event on its own. It resolved things, but they weren\'t the things I was really looking for. Being the base person I am, I\'m pretty much constantly looking for 1. angst, 2. sex, 3. humor, or some combination of the above. A few days later, when I\'ve gotten some sleep and recovered a bit from school wiping my brain, THEN I\'ll enjoy things like plot (which I usually demand in all except the times of little brain ^^;), and character development (I can actually hear the wheels in Yuki\'s head turning as he figures things out and works things out within himself, and I really really like that), and all those lovely \"you need to pay attention\" things. The things you pick up on and string together and enjoy when you reread a fic... and you do that for me. ^^

Thank you. Please keep writing, and I\'ll keep checking back.

BRILLIANT!!!!

update soon, aiyee!!

Cool story! i just love it - that can\'t be helped :)

Chpt 19: Wow, I read this fic last night and finished it up this morning ... and it is really amazing! First off, I normally *hate* any m-preg story, but I really enjoyed your other fics so I decided to give it to a chance, and wow. I like how you spent time making the whole m-preg possible and turning it into an interesting plot device to show how biggotry can damage relationships and is always based on mistrust, fear, and often misinformation. Poor Shu, you gave us a tragic character, but not one who deserves to be pitied, I appreciate that he was trying to do what he thought was best and take care of himself as best he could - but yet those actions are those of someone who isn\'t an adult and doesn\'t always think things all of the way through. The revealing of the true baby\'s daddy (which I\'m not convienced of, first off he\'s not been to a real doctor to even get a real pregnancy test, and only after that can they tell how far along he is so that we can figure out who the father is --- he might not be pregnant after all, or all the stress of this could easily cause a spontanous abortion (more common than you think a lot of people just don\'t realize their pregnant depending on how far along you want to make him). Sigh, abortion is such a loaded topic, I hope if you go that route that you treat it with the gravity it deserves, being pregnant when you don\'t want to be has a myriad of repracussions, and no matter if you chose to abort, have the baby but give it up for adoption, or keep it, the person who makes that decision is forever changed by it. Good luck on your upcomming chapter, we are all awaiting their next conversation!