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for On the Street of Dreams

by Chocho

person miyabi
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this fic, I\'ve been reading it since chap 8 or so, so I thought that maybe I really should review... ^^\'
You really are a good writer, plot is fantastic, it\'s just so good! ^____^
Congrats! Hope you update ASAP. ^-^


Huggies, miyabi
person me
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaa please update soon i need to know what happens next
person catmum56
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg - you\'re making us wait! Very good chapter, so you\'re forgiven. Like you care, right? :) Good flow of action and thoughts, and thanks to taking care ot Taka. That was very well done of you. Quite satisfying. Hope all is well with school, congrats on finishing your short story, and I look forward to your next chapter!
person Ojousan
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I liked it VERY much!
Can\'t wait to read the rest!
Thank you for writing! You\'re great!
person xunxin
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o so kul but hurry up and get to shuichi and eiri
thats gonna be great
i cant wait
hurry and update
as far as i know, you dont have any up coming papers
so you better hurry it up with the next!!!!
i gotta say i was nervous when the detective was getting closer to the truth.
person Mariella
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! whats gonna happen!! *biting my nails* ooohhh pleas wright fast!
person me
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well at least taki\'s not around anymore to object to an abortionbut i wonder how eiri will take all this
person i love athrun
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
person Shadow Rayn
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw now I feel bad. Can\'t you just put him in the hospital intead of killing him? What will Ma-kun do?! Although I guess that would change your plot wouldnt it? Well, I just really want to see Eiri\'s reaction to the baby news most. B)
person Luciology
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normally read and write Harry Potter fanfiction - Harry/Draco to be specific, then a friend leant me the Gravitation books because the character Yuki Eiri is similar to fandom\'s version of adult Draco so I thought I would explore this side of fanfiction. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Mpreg is a tricky thing to write well and you have succeeded in creating an indepth tale with elements of canon and an excellent prologue to set the scene. I am hoping that the baby is Eiri\'s or that he will stand by Shuchi if not. Could you possibly let me know when you think you will update so I can look out for the next chapter?

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