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Ok, you mustmustmustmustmustmustmust continue this story. You have had me hanging on every word ever since chapter one and I then I find that it\'s incomplete, NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story rocks immensly, I freaking love it! So please, for the love of all that is holy, finish the story (preferably with a happy ending)
That is all I have to say, thank you and goodnight.

Lee

chp1 - woah, hank! lol, i felt like i was watching an episode of doctor quinn medicine woman!! that mixed with gravitation just made me laugh so much! anyways, gonna read the rest of the story now, just wanted to let you know how much that first chapter made me smile :D

i\'ll review properly when i\'ve read more and get up to date with the chapters, but the style of writing was really good and i like the ideas you have come up with so im sure i\'ll love it. n_n xx

Goddamnit, that Taki is a pain in the ass! Especially poor Shuichi\'s... OH, I can\'t take all of the suspense. Update soon. We don\'t like to be left hanging.

Oh please update soon!!! What\'s Shuichi going to do?! What\'s Taki going to do?! Will Tatsua find Shu in time. Please I have to know! I\'ll die of anticipation! Please update. I love this story

Please update soon. I love this story.

yahooooooo!
sorry it took me so long to review.
yes i did read this on....when was it? friday?
but i wasn\'t in the mood to think up something to write so here i am.
yehaw.
so anyway yeah boring day
gotta go to work
this sux. ooooo i mean this day sux but your story was the bomb
of course it was. duh!
it\'s the greatest story ever!!!!
HEHEHEHEHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
update soon

OMFG! i loved this chapter...haha! Eiri is soooo badassed...loved it. Hate Ayaka...so that worked out well too! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon \'cause the ending was so tense and just...damn...i\'m on the edge of my seat over here. you\'re so wicked.

(^_^)

ooh i do hope shu keeps the baby in the end. eiri deserves shu\'s baby to be his ^__^ i cant wait to read more. update again soon!!

Hey! Wow! Things are getting really exciting now! I hope for two things right now - (1) that Tatsuha will find Shuichi in time to stop him from making this drastic decision and (2) that Taki will get hit by a bus! :D I\'m glad Eiri knows the truth about himself and finally admits that he really does belong with Shu! Update soon!
Koneko
P.S. Does this new layout of aff totally suck or what?! BORING! Can we please find another color to use other than gray?!? sheesh...

Hey! This is pretty cool! I have to admit though that the first chapter completely threw me. I started reading and thought, \"What the Hell is this mess? An Old West story in the Gravitation section? Somebody must have mis-filed their story somehow.\" Then I saw the names Eric and Sara. \"A-ha!\", I realized, \"Now I see the connection!\" Eric and Sara = Eiri and Shu. Mystery solved. I don\'t know if you chose Eric and Sara on purpose or not but I thought it was a very clever choice of names. :D

As for Shuichi, *sigh* the poor guy just can\'t seem to catch a break. I feel so bad for him - rejected by everyone (esp Eiri, that ass!) and pregnant. (I hope he finds the strength to keep the baby!) I just wanted to slap Eiri for making that comment on neutrals! But what can one expect from the cold-hearted bastard we\'ve all come to know and love! *snerk!* The way that you\'ve woven just enough canon into this story gives it a kind of cohesiveness such that you kind of know what to expect from the characters but not quite. Pure genius if you ask me!! It\'s like the story we all know so well just tweaked a bit and expanded upon. Love it, love it!

As for one the possible fathers of Shu\'s baby, I was curious about something. Kizou made a comment about a kid being \"a painful reminder of what he would never be able to have\". Does that mean that he can\'t father children? That would kinda eliminate him as a possible father leaving Eiri and Taki (eww! Taki. yuk! nasty!). I\'m cheering for Eiri to be the daddy in case you can\'t tell! ^_~ Eiri needs to get his act together first tho! :)

Update ASAP!
Koneko

P.S. Tatsuha and Ryuichi are really great in this story. They come across as a loving couple that just naturally fit together and compliment each other. I can\'t believe I just wrote something positive about Tatsuha!! Normally I can\'t stand Tatsuha because I adore Ryuichi and don\'t like seeing him with that gigolo Tatsuha! meh! Yes, I\'m a nut-case but at least I admit my faults! :P UPDATE SOON!! :D