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for On the Street of Dreams

by Chocho

person Azure
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^yup yup keep it rollin! you have sum good stories you know...! thanks for sharing them (o.o)b
person xunxin
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love to say how much i loved this chapter and all the good stuf.
but...
IM WAY TOO HUNGRY FOR THAT!! I NEED FOOD!!
anyway.. im tired.
great chappie, loved it, poor shu, go eiri.
there i did it. happy?
lol.
update soon.
person ladyfiend
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhh! no no no no no! continue! CONTINUE! omg omg omg omg omg



you are SO evil.


grr.
person inumoon3
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! That was a shocker!!! Poor Eiri, now I bet he\'ll think twice about what he thinks about neutrals, now! I hope Shu\'s not really going to get an abortion; Shu doesn\'t need his parents, all he needs is Eiri, Ryu, and everyone who cares about him to help him get through. Damn, this story\'s gettin\' good, so update soon, okay!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
person inumoon3
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shu! His parents are assholes, and poor Tatsuha and Ryu-chan! I hope Tatsu finds Shu soon, before Shu does something stupid! You have to update, and we NEED to see more Eiri!!!! Well anyway update soon!
person me
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this kid had better be eiri\' so that after words some one can smack him for hating nuetrals and putting shuichi through this
person Reader
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa...!!! I am crying! Poor Shu!!!
person ladyfiend
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a good author can invoke such strong emotions in his/her readers. and i must say...i\'m fucking pissed and sad as hell! dude...this was an amazingly emotional chapter and i hope you update again VERY soon! congrats on a job well done...until next time!
person dae
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this chapter was so heartbreaking...the part where shuichi was crying daddy and stuff and mama that was like so said i actually cried.i love this fic update soon.
person starlight
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lov ur story pleases let Eiri be the father am putting my trust in u. llllllooooooooovvvveeeeee uuuuuuu!!!!!!

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