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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of the story so far...But I've noticed some continuity errors. Referring to the wedding, in chapters 8 and 9, you switch from saying that it's in 8 days to it's in either 4 or 5 days. I hate to say this, but if your going to write fiction, at least keeep your facts straight. At the best, it's painful to read major errors like that in fiction about one of the best anime/mangas of all time.
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was totally awesome!!!!!!!!!
I enjoyed every chapter, I was just looking around and founf your story and it´s great. I loved the humor, the loving, the tenderness, everything was reaally nice. I´d love to read any of your stories in the future.
I enjoyed every chapter, I was just looking around and founf your story and it´s great. I loved the humor, the loving, the tenderness, everything was reaally nice. I´d love to read any of your stories in the future.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel or something please?
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW That was so sweet And is kinda cool cause my best friend is getting maried so ya sniff...sniff that was so touching
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent! keep up the fantastic work!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story and I hope to read more of your works soon.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE best ever !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT
GREAT
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?